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    • tombarrettillo
      tombarrettillo @artbytra last edited by

      @fauxtoddgraphy I like #4, but perhaps he could be coming out of a pipe

      https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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      • tombarrettillo
        tombarrettillo @holleywilliamson last edited by

        @holleywilliamson Neat idea! I think you need to bring the view down closer to the water, and make the bug and stone fill up more of the scene. Also, the person's stance is more of someone who is off balance or falling. Google some images on people skipping stones. Most people keep their body facing the direction they are throwing, leaning in the direction of the throwing arm as they fling the stone past their bent leg. Lastly, fewer contact points on the water would make the skipping more believable (there are too many too close together). Maybe lose the first, third, and fifth ripples, and they should be in a direct line between the thrower and the stone.

        https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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        • tombarrettillo
          tombarrettillo @bdyanne last edited by

          @bdyanne like this update!

          https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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          • Russ Van Dine
            Russ Van Dine last edited by

            Jackalope on a racing ostrich...

            0_1505276720706_f2.jpg

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            • Russ Van Dine
              Russ Van Dine last edited by

              0_1505276811353_2.jpg Cowboy rabbit on a riding ostrich...

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              • Russ Van Dine
                Russ Van Dine last edited by

                0_1505276872294_DASH.jpg ... maybe this one

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                • Russ Van Dine
                  Russ Van Dine last edited by

                  0_1505277060764_rabbittractor1.jpg maybe this one...

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                  • Russ Van Dine
                    Russ Van Dine last edited by

                    0_1505277123235_Untitled-2.jpg or this one... as you can tell, I love this theme, I draw this type of stuff all the time...

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                    • Russ Van Dine
                      Russ Van Dine last edited by

                      0_1505277216922_rabbit car.jpg This one is more recent...

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                      • stringfellowart
                        stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                        Can I just say I really really want to do a TARDIS? 😉

                        Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
                        www.stringfellowart.com
                        www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                        • Diego_BioSteam
                          Diego_BioSteam last edited by

                          My first sketch (also my first post in the Forum). Just pencil and ink for now. Any feedback is welcome!
                          0_1505313717007_Fotor_150530021447958.jpg

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                          • tombarrettillo
                            tombarrettillo last edited by

                            Here is my WIP for the Transportation contest. Been a fan of steampunk for a while, so that is part of my theme with this. The machine is a transporter, and the city is what will show in the transporter's portal (larger circular area). The small thumbnail is where I am at with the composition. And lastly, the character is the scientist who created the machine.

                            https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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