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    • bdyanne
      bdyanne @holleywilliamson last edited by

      @holleywilliamson I think it works, I like your idea!

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      • artbytra
        artbytra SVS OG last edited by

        Some thumbs on an idea for Transportation. I'm having a hard time choosing angles, choosing to use crinkled soda can or surfboard...any thoughts would be greatly appreciated! I know I've shown up out of the blue from time to time but I wanted to say hello to all and thanks to SVS for this platform. Art rules. 🙂 -TA

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        https://www.instagram.com/art.by.tra/

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        • bdyanne
          bdyanne @artbytra last edited by

          @fauxtoddgraphy I like the action in number 4, I would say probably not to number 1. The head on point of view is very difficult to pull off.

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          • bdyanne
            bdyanne @bdyanne last edited by

            new WIP0_1505248607891_transporting.jpg

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            • holleywilliamson
              holleywilliamson SVS OG @artbytra last edited by

              @fauxtoddgraphy I think you should have him surf on an old can like 4 or 5

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              • mcucchi
                mcucchi last edited by

                Hi guys! Great idea to start a WIP thread. It's cool to learn from each other as we work through these. Here is my idea for the transportation theme: Witch-portation in the Modern Age

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                instagram.com/crookedandbeautiful
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                • mcucchi
                  mcucchi @bdyanne last edited by

                  @bdyanne nice update! This feels much more dynamic!

                  portfolio: moniquecucchi.com
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                  • tombarrettillo
                    tombarrettillo @artbytra last edited by

                    @fauxtoddgraphy I like #4, but perhaps he could be coming out of a pipe

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                    • tombarrettillo
                      tombarrettillo @holleywilliamson last edited by

                      @holleywilliamson Neat idea! I think you need to bring the view down closer to the water, and make the bug and stone fill up more of the scene. Also, the person's stance is more of someone who is off balance or falling. Google some images on people skipping stones. Most people keep their body facing the direction they are throwing, leaning in the direction of the throwing arm as they fling the stone past their bent leg. Lastly, fewer contact points on the water would make the skipping more believable (there are too many too close together). Maybe lose the first, third, and fifth ripples, and they should be in a direct line between the thrower and the stone.

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                      • tombarrettillo
                        tombarrettillo @bdyanne last edited by

                        @bdyanne like this update!

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                        • Russ Van Dine
                          Russ Van Dine last edited by

                          Jackalope on a racing ostrich...

                          0_1505276720706_f2.jpg

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                          • Russ Van Dine
                            Russ Van Dine last edited by

                            0_1505276811353_2.jpg Cowboy rabbit on a riding ostrich...

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                            • Russ Van Dine
                              Russ Van Dine last edited by

                              0_1505276872294_DASH.jpg ... maybe this one

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                              • Russ Van Dine
                                Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                0_1505277060764_rabbittractor1.jpg maybe this one...

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                                • Russ Van Dine
                                  Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                  0_1505277123235_Untitled-2.jpg or this one... as you can tell, I love this theme, I draw this type of stuff all the time...

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                                  • Russ Van Dine
                                    Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                    0_1505277216922_rabbit car.jpg This one is more recent...

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                                    • stringfellowart
                                      stringfellowart SVS OG last edited by

                                      Can I just say I really really want to do a TARDIS? 😉

                                      Bringing whimsical creatures to life.
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                                      www.instagram/stringfellowart

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                                      • Diego_BioSteam
                                        Diego_BioSteam last edited by

                                        My first sketch (also my first post in the Forum). Just pencil and ink for now. Any feedback is welcome!
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                                        • tombarrettillo
                                          tombarrettillo last edited by

                                          Here is my WIP for the Transportation contest. Been a fan of steampunk for a while, so that is part of my theme with this. The machine is a transporter, and the city is what will show in the transporter's portal (larger circular area). The small thumbnail is where I am at with the composition. And lastly, the character is the scientist who created the machine.

                                          https://www.youtube.com/@tombarrettart

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