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    • bdyanne
      bdyanne @TessaW last edited by

      @tessw awesome idea changing the moment in time...got me thinking... thank you for your input!

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      • bdyanne
        bdyanne @TessaW last edited by

        @tessw You know, those areas were bothering me and now I know why lol. Good eye! I really do need to look for them more often. Thanks!

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        • bdyanne
          bdyanne @evilrobot last edited by

          @evilrobot Well he actually is slightly off the desk, barely in the air which is why the rope gets tapered. I didn't put details or shadow, so it's hard to tell. I need to work on the perspective as well. Thanks so much! Awesome ideas.

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          • holleywilliamson
            holleywilliamson SVS OG last edited by

            This my rough idea for transportation. I am wondering if the composition leads your eye right off the page or if the trees in the background/reflection are enough to lead your eye back around? Any other thoughts welcome.
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            • bdyanne
              bdyanne @holleywilliamson last edited by

              @holleywilliamson I think it works, I like your idea!

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              • artbytra
                artbytra SVS OG last edited by

                Some thumbs on an idea for Transportation. I'm having a hard time choosing angles, choosing to use crinkled soda can or surfboard...any thoughts would be greatly appreciated! I know I've shown up out of the blue from time to time but I wanted to say hello to all and thanks to SVS for this platform. Art rules. 🙂 -TA

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                • bdyanne
                  bdyanne @artbytra last edited by

                  @fauxtoddgraphy I like the action in number 4, I would say probably not to number 1. The head on point of view is very difficult to pull off.

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                  • bdyanne
                    bdyanne @bdyanne last edited by

                    new WIP0_1505248607891_transporting.jpg

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                    • holleywilliamson
                      holleywilliamson SVS OG @artbytra last edited by

                      @fauxtoddgraphy I think you should have him surf on an old can like 4 or 5

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                      • mcucchi
                        mcucchi last edited by

                        Hi guys! Great idea to start a WIP thread. It's cool to learn from each other as we work through these. Here is my idea for the transportation theme: Witch-portation in the Modern Age

                        0_1505265515449_IMG_412.jpg

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                        • mcucchi
                          mcucchi @bdyanne last edited by

                          @bdyanne nice update! This feels much more dynamic!

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                          • tombarrettillo
                            tombarrettillo @artbytra last edited by

                            @fauxtoddgraphy I like #4, but perhaps he could be coming out of a pipe

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                            • tombarrettillo
                              tombarrettillo @holleywilliamson last edited by

                              @holleywilliamson Neat idea! I think you need to bring the view down closer to the water, and make the bug and stone fill up more of the scene. Also, the person's stance is more of someone who is off balance or falling. Google some images on people skipping stones. Most people keep their body facing the direction they are throwing, leaning in the direction of the throwing arm as they fling the stone past their bent leg. Lastly, fewer contact points on the water would make the skipping more believable (there are too many too close together). Maybe lose the first, third, and fifth ripples, and they should be in a direct line between the thrower and the stone.

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                              • tombarrettillo
                                tombarrettillo @bdyanne last edited by

                                @bdyanne like this update!

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                                • Russ Van Dine
                                  Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                  Jackalope on a racing ostrich...

                                  0_1505276720706_f2.jpg

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                                  • Russ Van Dine
                                    Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                    0_1505276811353_2.jpg Cowboy rabbit on a riding ostrich...

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                                    • Russ Van Dine
                                      Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                      0_1505276872294_DASH.jpg ... maybe this one

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                                      • Russ Van Dine
                                        Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                        0_1505277060764_rabbittractor1.jpg maybe this one...

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                                        • Russ Van Dine
                                          Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                          0_1505277123235_Untitled-2.jpg or this one... as you can tell, I love this theme, I draw this type of stuff all the time...

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                                          • Russ Van Dine
                                            Russ Van Dine last edited by

                                            0_1505277216922_rabbit car.jpg This one is more recent...

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