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    • Jason Bowen
      Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

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      Hey I am currently working on my transportation idea... I wanted something with energy and interaction, I'm still working on it but I thought I'd see if anyone has any improvement ideas they want to share.

      The tall guy is going to be hi-fiving the smaller guy I think.

      https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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      • j.sienkowski
        j.sienkowski last edited by

        I love the poses of the three guys in red, but the tall guy seems a little stiff in comparison. Maybe give him a more dynamic pose. Maybe he could be REALLY tall and have to bend over to high five? That could add a little humor...if you want to go that direction.

        www.instagram.com/jsienkowski
        www.jtsienkowski.com

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        • evilrobot
          evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

          Like the idea I'm doing sort of a similar theme myself. I would add a bit of perspective going back into space. Have a foreground, middle ground, and background and overlap the the characters. Maybe get a bit more variety of characters as far as sex and ethnicity. Maybe get a hint of where this is at...the crowded street, car show, beach, some sort of convention.

          http://www.palacioillustration.com/

          https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

          https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

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          • Jason Bowen
            Jason Bowen SVS OG @j.sienkowski last edited by

            @j-sienkowski haha I like the idea of him really tall. The tall guy is on his first pass I was at a head scratching moment with his pose. I'll try a few poses and see what happens thanks.

            https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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            • Jason Bowen
              Jason Bowen SVS OG @evilrobot last edited by

              @evilrobot good points thanks... I never really thought about where they are exactly I was so focused on there poses, I need to have a think about that thanks. Good luck with yours.

              https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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