Slowvember - Prepare for Winter

Nyrryl Cadiz

Hi! You have a great idea here, however, I can't fully understand what these squirrels are doing though. Are they storing wood or are they storing peanuts(or nuts in general)? I would also like to point out their hands. This is just based on my taste but they seem too thin and sharp to me as if they're claws. Another suggestion, you could also add some sort of a hole in the tree where the squirrels are storing their supplies. Perhaps you could show the hole overflowing with nuts and stuff. I hope you find this helpful.

Jon Anderson

Hi Chip! I like the concept but I'm confused by the three little stumps in front of the main squirrel on the left. They don't match the flow of the other branches and it doesn't appear to naturally join the trunk there. I could just nor be seeing it right, though.

Chip Valecek

@nyrryl-cadiz Yes i think adding a hole for the food is a great idea.

Chip Valecek

@jon-anderson I see what you mean about the stumps, i will try to re work that a little. I was trying to show an area where they little guys are sitting.

JajaJulie

Hi @Chip-Valecek!

Love this concept, squirrels are so cute when they prepare for winter. :3

I have just a couple of things that might help with your piece.

The first thing that stood out to me was the bird. I felt it was out of place, however, I think it might have just been due to his line of vision. It's taking the viewer eyes away from the piece when we follow it.

Hope you don't mind I did a quick draw over to demonstrate what I mean.

I felt if you changed its line of vision to maybe be looking at what they're gathering, then it will engage the bird into the piece.

Another thing I noticed was that the squirrel parent seemed to be admiring the "food, gathering materials" for itself. Almost like Gollum from Lord of the Rings "My Precious" Haha. I felt that if the parent squirrel turned towards the babies as if it's offering it to them then it would look more like a family preparing for winter.

This combined with all the critters line of vision, allows the viewer to understand better what is occurring within the piece.

Awesome job, can't wait to see as this piece progresses through Slowvember!

Chip Valecek

@jajajulie awesome feedback! Thank you so much for taking the time to do that. I agree with all you said.

Chip Valecek

Here it is with the changes. What do you all think?

aska

@chip-valecek big improvement, looks cool:)

JajaJulie

Looks great! @chip-valecek

Chip Valecek

Great thanks! Onto the next stage.

Chip Valecek

Here is my local values on separate layers. Helps when it comes to painting i can create clipping layers to added shadows and lights.

bennyschmidt12

nice characters, i think if i was going to make some changes it would about the hole in the tree, with the peanuts in it.
For the whole, i think where it touches the top of the squirrells ear. I think if you brought the whole down so it wouldnt look like it is flowing in to the ear, and the peanuts on the inside, the kinda match with the one he is holding, maybe if you twisted the one in his hand or the pile then the textures wouldnt line up so much. but shadding them different would help also.....hope this helped

good work!

Chip Valecek

Next step complete and always the most time consuming for me. Next up color.

aska

@chip-valecek looking good

Chip Valecek

After my values I use a color layer and slap on my colors.

From here I clean up the edges and define the forms a little more. Add in some light and additional shadows and call it done.

Chip Valecek

FYI my kids didn't like the big ear on the bird so at the last minute I scraped it. My kids are my biggest critics LOL.

aska

@chip-valecek mine too! Iam always scared to show them anything cause they don't put words in a warm blanket if they don't like smth;)