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      michaelale23 last edited by

      Hey what's up guys! I would really appreciate some feedback on my artwork. Things I could improve, things that aren't working or maybe things you would have done differently. Thanks so much peace out and always remember to stay creative!0_1510472677349_IMG_2990.JPG

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        A Former User last edited by

        you may want to work on exteding your values because it seems the highest it goes is 40-50%

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          bennyschmidt12 last edited by

          i love the detail, i think if you have a larger change from your highlights to your shadows, it would add more depth, looks good!

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            aska last edited by

            Its interesting and great details:) however whats the story? He is smoking and he is geting ready to attack someone. Sorry if i misunderstood smth, just asking:) also his left arm looks super thin, like his armour is too big. If thats the way it is then no problem, but if wanted him to be strong then i suggest adding some muscle.

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              michaelale23 @Guest last edited by

              @ben-migliore thanks so much! I felt that my values where lacking. I really appreciate the helpful tips!

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                michaelale23 @bennyschmidt12 last edited by

                @bennyschmidt12 thank you! that`s extremely helpful

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                  michaelale23 @aska last edited by

                  @aska This drawing was created out of a scribble after being extremely frustrated that i couldn't think of anything to draw lol Thank you for the helpful comment!

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                    aska @michaelale23 last edited by

                    @michaelale23 🙂 thats a very good scribble outcome!

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                      Kevin Longueil SVS OG @michaelale23 last edited by Kevin Longueil

                      @michaelale23 Hey Michael - i think your character looks great - reminded me of Carter Goodrich! (can you think of a better compliment than that?) i feel like you could go darker in places and lighter in others - i did a quick draw over after looking at some Carter Goodrich drawings - (i copied a piece of fur from one of them and stamped it a few times for the fur in your drawing) - i made a few tiny changes to try to clarify the silhouette around the feet - this is just my 2 cents and i am not a pro so feel free to ignore 🙂 - really nice piece

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                        michaelale23 @Kevin Longueil last edited by

                        @kevin-longueil thanks so much homie! I completely agree with what you are saying. love the changes you did as well looks dope ! thanks sooo much.

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