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    • umutdulger
      umutdulger last edited by

      Number 5 is looks great πŸ™‚

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      • rcartwright
        rcartwright last edited by

        Since you are trying to portray a giant I would use a lower perspective view I would consider using 2 cropped in tighter so you can't see the feet

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        • Chip Valecek
          Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Jason Bowen last edited by

          @jason-bowen I also like number 2 if you are going for the giant feel.


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          • Jason Bowen
            Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

            Thanks for your thoughts. πŸ™‚

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            • Jason Bowen
              Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

              Still working on my slowvember, I have given the foreground slayer more of a warrior look, now I need to give the giant two heads and make him look tall. Trying to put in everything I have learnt into this one.
              0_1511031633701_giant fight.jpg

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              • Jason Bowen
                Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                Starting to take shape, trying to hold off on getting the oil paints out too soon... trying to stay strong for slovember. 0_1511112915234_giant fight 2.jpg

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                • Eli
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                  • Eli
                    Eli last edited by

                    Hi @Jason-Bowen, cool piece! For me, the trees that are framing it in kind of diminish the size of the giant. It makes it feel more like the warrior is just really little. Maybe the idea is that the trees are really giant as well? If the trees are supposed to be normal sized trees, and you still want to frame the piece in with them, then the giant and warrior would need to be a lot further away. I think there would be a better sense of the giant's hugeness if the trees matched the scale of the warrior...

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                    • Jason Bowen
                      Jason Bowen SVS OG @Eli last edited by

                      @eli I see what you mean thanks I will have a think about it. πŸ™‚

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                      • Jason Bowen
                        Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                        Gone for a different comp that has a bit more drama, and more importantly I can have fun painting πŸ™‚ 0_1511209723615_IMG_20171120_202255.jpg

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                        • Jason Bowen
                          Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                          Had a go at sketching the giants heads 0_1511209835557_IMG_20171120_202206.jpg

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                          • Jason Bowen
                            Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                            0_1511717288559_IMG_20171125_195541.jpg Been having fun messing about on photoshop to create my simple comp. Now I am doing the fun part, Oil Painting πŸ™‚

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                            • aska
                              aska @Jason Bowen last edited by

                              @jason-bowen great expresions!

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                              • Jason Bowen
                                Jason Bowen SVS OG @aska last edited by

                                @aska thanks a lot πŸ™‚

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