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    Glacier WIP - Please Critique!

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    • MOO
      MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

      Looks great! The only thing I wonder about is the dock being just a bit out of perspective (one of my weaknesses though so I might be wrong). It seems like it should be just a bit narrower on the far end of the viewer. No big deal though.

      Marsha Ottum Owen

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        A Former User @MOO last edited by

        @marsha-kay-ottum-owen Thanks. You're perfectly right about the dock. I was trying to abstract many of the elements so I scrapped scientific perspective for the style

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        • MOO
          MOO SVS OG @Guest last edited by

          @ben-migliore Sounds good to me! It looks great and I'm all for scrapping perspective at times 🙂

          Marsha Ottum Owen

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            bennyschmidt12 last edited by

            this look great, if i would ad anything, i would put some of that texture you have in the back ground hills and stuff into the snow that cabins are on, and by the docks....just at thought, really cool piece!

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              A Former User last edited by A Former User

              @Pamela-Fraley @Kevin-Longueil @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen @bennyschmidt12
              Thank you for your feedback!! I made a lot of changes since your critiques. Here's what it looks like...

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              • Kevin Longueil
                Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                @ben-migliore Very Nice!

                Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                • Pamela Fraley
                  Pamela Fraley SVS OG @Guest last edited by

                  @ben-migliore Love it!! And that smoke is sweet too. 👌🏼👌🏼

                  instagram.com/fraleycreates

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                    bennyschmidt12 last edited by

                    oh yeah!, love it!

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                    • evilrobot
                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                      This is looking fantastic. Nice work.

                      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                      • Christine Garner
                        Christine Garner last edited by

                        Very nice work!

                        website: https://thimblefolio.com

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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG last edited by

                          @ben-migliore Looks great!

                          Marsha Ottum Owen

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