Slowvember WIP - pls help
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Hi,
I feel a bit stuck with my Slowvember. Probably i took on too complicated idea. Anyway, I will appreciate critiques that could get me going further. Thanks in advance guys!
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@aska Hey Aska, you were so helpful to me, so hope I can give you some good advice. I like the perspective,
the tones are coming along nicely, and the big red elephant really pops. I'm finding the shadow behind the piano bear
distracting. Maybe he should be under a spot light and the drape behind him darker. You have two focal points, and if the elephant is the main focal point, how is he being lit? -
@elaine-b thank you Elaine!
You gave me some direction and I will try to go that way and see if I can move this pic further. At this moment i feel tired with it and lost, as I am very unexperienced with color and lighting. Thanks again -
Hi,
Thats what I got for now. It's going really slow. What do you think? Critiques are very welcome!
@Elaine-B after I changed what you suggested, it become easier. What do you think?
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@aska Looks great!
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Slowvember is soooo much work... but i am getting closer
If you have any critiques for me, I will be very grateful. I really want it to be my best piece.
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@aska Hey Aska, this looks really good!
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@aska It's a fun picture, I like the crowd and the elephant :)... crit wise I would look at the shadow under the piano and try and break up the mass of it. Google "pianist playing on stage" and look at the different lighting setups might help
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@jason-bowen very useful comment, thank you!
