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    • late2theparty
      late2theparty last edited by late2theparty

      Okay, thoughts on this one community? 0_1519095464655_octopus sandwich 1280w.jpg

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      • Chip Valecek
        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @late2theparty last edited by

        @late2theparty I would change the color of the octopus. It gets a little lost against the lettuce.


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          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Chip Valecek last edited by

          @chip-valecek I agree. Something red would look great 🙂

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            late2theparty @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

            @nyrryl-cadiz @Chip-Valecek the idea was that some octopus camouflage themselves around their surroundings... i like the red idea though... i can select the octopus and adjust its hue to red i believe... check back in a few... thank you both...

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              aska @late2theparty last edited by

              @late2theparty I really like the way you have drawn and coloured octopus sandwich. However I am not sure of rendering on the boy and the background. It feels like there is too much color there and takes focus from the sandwich. It could be also difference in texture, which is nice on the sandwich but almost flat on the rest of drawing. You are close to very cool drawing tho! 🙂

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @late2theparty last edited by

                @late2theparty Thant's a great idea. Wouldn't it be great if the octopus is copying the burger's overall color? that would be fun 🙂

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                • late2theparty
                  late2theparty @Chip Valecek last edited by

                  @chip-valecek @Nyrryl-Cadiz here it is in red now... which one looks best? 0_1519131524760_octopus sandwich red.jpg

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                  • late2theparty
                    late2theparty last edited by

                    I'm also trying to decide which on of these to enter into the Feb challenge... the other one is http://forum.svslearn.com/topic/5544/octopus-for-dinner/12 ... any favorite?

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                    • Jon Anderson
                      Jon Anderson SVS OG @late2theparty last edited by

                      @late2theparty I like the idea of the red octopus drawing attention to be the focal point. For narrative purposes maybe it was copying a tomato. When it was green I think the eyes had to search to long for the beginning and end of the octopus and the lettuce.

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                      • Chip Valecek
                        Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                        The red works much better.


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                        • late2theparty
                          late2theparty last edited by

                          Ha! I saw this post and had to add it just for fun... Curious Octopus on Reddit this morning

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                          • Eli
                            Eli @late2theparty last edited by

                            @late2theparty Ha! I saw that and wanted to post it also, but couldn't get it to work. Glad you did!

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                              late2theparty @Eli last edited by

                              @eli only wish i could have figured out how to post the video here and not just the link... ah well... pretty cool vid...

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                                late2theparty last edited by

                                Another funny vid of an octopus running... https://i.imgur.com/hO56wvK.gifv ... where were all of these earlier when we needed them?

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