Octopus Zeppelin WIP
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Here's my layout and super rough values for my February contest entry. Hope I can finish it in time! Dang February is a few days shorter than other months. I'm planning to add more foliage/texture into the landscape but wanted your feedback on the overall composition. Thanks!
Carrie Copa
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@carriecopa
Anything with zeppelins wins in my books.
I like the overall composition. It's easy to pick out the foreground, mid ground and background. I assume there'll be some kind of clouds in the sky? (Or more super far away squideppelins?)
Octeppelins.
Octopeppelins.
Zepelus.
Either way, neat idea!
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Very cool:)
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@carriecopa I really like this drawing! The only feedback I have is that when i flip the composition horizontally so that the action moves from left to right that my eye moves around the composition more freely - at the moment it feels like my eye hovers on the left hand side of the composition mostly with the important elements of the house and cable and Octopus forming a vertical line that arrests the eye ....basically it looks great now but it Might flow a bit better flipped
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@kevin-longueil Thanks for the suggestion, the flipped version DOES flow better! Then the tentacles and other environment stuff direct your eyes through the illustration to the focal point.
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Fun concept! I'm no expert, but the values and composition look pretty good to me.
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Love it! What a great concept!
