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    • Spencer Hale
      Spencer Hale last edited by

      I like #1 the rounded forms and composition are really nice.

      spencerhalefire.tumblr.com | instagram.com/spencerhalefire | twitter.com/spencerhale

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      • Johanna Kim
        Johanna Kim SVS OG last edited by

        I gravitate to #2 right away, though #4 has an interesting composition and story. Suggest doing #2 for the contest and reserving #4 for a separate project.

        http://www.johannakim.com
        http://instagram.com/johannahkim/

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        • Jonas Zavacky
          Jonas Zavacky last edited by

          I personally like the #4 most 😃 the bug's expression and shape is hilarious 😃

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          • lmrush
            lmrush Pro SVS OG last edited by

            they are all great My favorites are 2 and 4

            Lisa Rush
            www.lisarushgallery.com
            www.facebook.com/ArtbyLisaRush/
            www.instagram.com/lisarush11/

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            • Eric Castleman
              Eric Castleman last edited by

              #1. I would like to see that cardboard train with cardboard wheels. Maybe have some crayon drawn images on the side...or maybe the wheels could look like they are drawn in crayon. I am just rambling here, but I like the potential of #1 a lot.

              EricCastleman.com

              SCBWI profile
              https://www.scbwi.org/members-public/eric-castleman

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              • Jon Anderson
                Jon Anderson SVS OG last edited by

                Look at you turning up the creative heat again this month! Man, these all have potential but I like #1 best. Can't wait to see which direction you go.

                instagram.com/jonandersonillu

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                • Gary Wilkinson
                  Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                  Thanks for all of your replies! I have almost finished no.2, but part way through I decided to change the concept, so I don't think it fits well with the travel theme anymore, but it felt more suited to change it for my portfolio.

                  I think I will go for 1 as it seems more "travel" themed and hope to get it done before the end of the contest!

                  www.garywilkinsonart.com
                  www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                  www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                  • Gary Wilkinson
                    Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                    So I'm probably not going to go with this piece for the competition as it changed to something that wasn't travel themed in the end, but I thought I would put it up just for show. Time to start no.2! @Eric-Castleman I like your idea of the wheels drawn in crown, that would look cool

                    0_1524044959596_Cardboard Planesm.jpg

                    www.garywilkinsonart.com
                    www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                    www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                    • Spencer Hale
                      Spencer Hale last edited by

                      Looks great!

                      spencerhalefire.tumblr.com | instagram.com/spencerhalefire | twitter.com/spencerhale

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                      • Margarita Levina
                        Margarita Levina last edited by

                        I just LOVE this illustration!) Your style is brilliant!!!

                        http://www.margaritalevina.com/
                        https://www.instagram.com/margaritalevina/

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                        • Gary Wilkinson
                          Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                          @Spencer-Hale
                          @margarita-levina
                          Thank you I really appreciate it 🙂 Hoping to do a few more cardboard adventure illustrations soon

                          www.garywilkinsonart.com
                          www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                          www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                          • Gary Wilkinson
                            Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                            So I decided to go with the train idea and just started roughing in the colors. I'm planning to have different toys in each of the carriages as they travel on their cardboard adventures.

                            0_1524116555298_cardboard train 7colorsm.jpg

                            www.garywilkinsonart.com
                            www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                            www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                            • Margarita Levina
                              Margarita Levina @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                              @gary-wilkinson I like the composition in this work, and the colors are very good) Looking forward to see the final result. Btw, are you working on the one layer?

                              http://www.margaritalevina.com/
                              https://www.instagram.com/margaritalevina/

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                              • Gary Wilkinson
                                Gary Wilkinson @Margarita Levina last edited by

                                @margarita-levina I usually make a quick grayscale painting to decide on the lighting, then do a multiply layer to add some colors and then paint in a normal layer over that. I usually stick to one layer when painting but make temporary layers just in case I mess up, but also to compare the changes.

                                www.garywilkinsonart.com
                                www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                                www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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                                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                  @gary-wilkinson I love all your concepts! Very creative! I love the girl's expression on number 2 and I simply like the idea of her flying away from home. Sometimes, I also wanted to do that when I was a kid. I also love the train and the overall composition of image #1. I don't know if you can but I would love to see an amalgamation of both images. Lastly, the sugar dealer. I think it would be amazing if you can make a separate illustration of it. I think it would be a great portfolio piece. Great work!!!

                                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                    @gary-wilkinson AMAZING!!!!!

                                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                                    • evilrobot
                                      evilrobot SVS OG last edited by

                                      NICE work! This is looking amazing.

                                      http://www.palacioillustration.com/

                                      https://www.scbwi.org/illustrator-gallery/illustrator-detail/?illustrator_id=84142

                                      https://www.pinterest.com/evilrobot2/pins/

                                      https://twitter.com/MyEvilRobot

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                                      • artwithashley
                                        artwithashley last edited by

                                        Gary, do I see a cameo appearance of the bear and giraffe from your last piece? Really nice work, I'm really enjoying the paint like strokes that I'm seeing.

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                                        • lenwen
                                          lenwen @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

                                          @gary-wilkinson wow I really like the colors and composition! it looks great! keep it forward 😃

                                          www.lennywen.com
                                          https://www.instagram.com/lunartcy/

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                                          • Gary Wilkinson
                                            Gary Wilkinson @artwithashley last edited by

                                            @artwithashley - you found the easter egg yay 🙂 I needed to bring them out of the trash and give them a new owner (damn kids with smartphones!)

                                            @lenwen - thank you! I put the final piece on the contest page. Hope you like it 🙂

                                            www.garywilkinsonart.com
                                            www.instagram.com/gwillustration/
                                            www.twitter.com/GWillustration

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