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    Dorothy is finished - thanks everyone :)

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    • Kevin Longueil
      Kevin Longueil SVS OG last edited by Kevin Longueil

      Calling the new Dorothy done - i am so glad i restarted her - Thank you all for your help! I appreciate All of the feedback i received, it has made it a better piece for sure!

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      Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
      https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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      • Sarah LuAnn
        Sarah LuAnn SVS OG last edited by

        Looking lovely! And way to go for really working to get the details right.

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        • Gary Wilkinson
          Gary Wilkinson last edited by

          Love it. I feel it's a big improvement on the previous one

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          • lidia-ull
            lidia-ull last edited by

            @Kevin-Longueil She and Toto look great!

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            • Leontine
              Leontine last edited by

              @Kevin-Longueil Awesome work! well done, you may be very proud of this!

              Leontine
              "A picture is worth a thousand words."

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              • rcartwright
                rcartwright last edited by

                I like your use of shadow and lost edges at edge of the dog and under her arm

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                • Kevin Longueil
                  Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Sarah LuAnn last edited by

                  @sarah-luann Thank you Sarah LuAnn! Including the time I spent on the original I've got 22 plus hours into her.... I don't know if that is a good thing or a bad thing - most likely both 🙂
                  @Gary-Wilkinson Thank you Gary - I think it is a big improvement too! - I appreciate your feedback.
                  @lidia-ull Thank you Lidia!
                  @Leontine Thank you Leontine! I am proud of her for sure ...mostly It is hard to believe that I drew her....she seems to be a step up of some sort (but judging from my current struggles on re working the Tin Man I may not have leveled up yet 🙂
                  @rcartwright Thank you Richard - I like lost edges - lost in light and in shadow - I often fear it is a distracting convention - I am glad to hear that you like it too 🙂

                  Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                  https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                  • DOTTYP
                    DOTTYP last edited by

                    Beautiful your attention to detail is amazing.

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                      Hopper12 last edited by

                      Wow this is beautiful!

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                      • Kevin Longueil
                        Kevin Longueil SVS OG @DOTTYP last edited by

                        @dottyp @Hopper12 Thank you both! I really appreciate the kind words!

                        Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                        https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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                        • Jodi Gregg
                          Jodi Gregg last edited by

                          OMGosh! All your hard work has really paid off! Love her expression and design! Really amazing work!

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                          • Kevin Longueil
                            Kevin Longueil SVS OG @Jodi Gregg last edited by

                            @jodi-gregg Thank you so much for the kind words Jodi! I think your Mermaid looks great too!

                            Portfolio: kevinlongueil.com
                            https://www.instagram.com/kevinlongueil/

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