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    • ShannonBiondi
      ShannonBiondi SVS OG last edited by ShannonBiondi

      Hi guys,

      I've been working on the How to Ink course by Jake Parker.

      Here are a few photos that show my progress over the past 3 months. Could you guys give me feedback and criticism?

      I'd like to know how I can further improve so if you see anything wrong or have advice on how best to continue practicing, please feel free to help me!!

      Thanks!!

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      @abhainn_fionn

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      • rcartwright
        rcartwright last edited by

        Nice work overall, one thing that I noticed is the line around the whale could be thinner in the light side areas to help the image read better

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        • ShannonBiondi
          ShannonBiondi SVS OG @rcartwright last edited by

          @rcartwright Thanks so much for your input. I really appreciate the advice. Will take that on board for my next practice 🙂

          @abhainn_fionn

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