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    • MarkAlan74
      MarkAlan74 last edited by MarkAlan74

      I've been through the perspective classes, how to draw everything, and inking with a pen brush. Here is a drawing of a bunny I found online and I saw a lot of ovals, circles, and cubes so I a gave it a shot...

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      • Eli
        Eli last edited by

        Hi @MarkAlan74 , I'm not seeing he image

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        • Heather Boyd
          Heather Boyd last edited by Heather Boyd

          I don't really have any experience with markers however perhaps it is the quality of your marker, it looks blotchy or uneven in sections. I would work on blending and making certain all none white areas are covered, no white seeping through.

          The bunny is definitively cute, if its a direct copy ensure that your audience is aware of that fact, I am never certain how to go about copyright issues, but if it is for practise keep playing around.

          And I can see it. 🙂

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          Be blessed,

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          • Eli
            Eli @Eli last edited by

            @eli I can see it now--must have been a glitch!

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            • MarkAlan74
              MarkAlan74 @Heather Boyd last edited by

              @heather-boyd Thank you Heather, I used Copic Markers and I can see the blotchy sections you are talking about. Thank your for your help. The original copy came from Pinterest, I'm just using it for practice. Thanks again.

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              • Durribie
                Durribie last edited by

                He's cute!

                What paper are you using? I work in Copics a lot and what paper you use is very important. I have sketched and colored on regular computer paper and it make those blobs and streaks too. When I use it on bristol or a mixed media with a vellum surface the markers blend like a dream!

                http://dreamvalestudios.com/
                https://www.instagram.com/dreamvalestudios/

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                • Jason Bowen
                  Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

                  check this video out on markers it might help you out: https://youtu.be/tzkd1_f0wUk

                  https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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                  • MarkAlan74
                    MarkAlan74 @Durribie last edited by

                    @durribie thank your for your advice, I used the 100 weight card stock that Jake Parker mentioned in "How to Draw Everything" lesson. I will try some bristol, thank you so much for your help.

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                    • MarkAlan74
                      MarkAlan74 last edited by

                      @jason-bowen Thanks Jason, that was an awesome video!! Short and packed with great advice, I learned a lot.

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