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    • Thrace
      Thrace @Lee White last edited by

      @Lee-White wow, it is so cool to see something you created brought to a new level! I have watched you edit others' work but it really does help my motivational level to see the changes made to mine. Thank you so much for doing this for me, I can't express enough how grateful I am!

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      • Lee White
        Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

        My pleasure! It's so fun for Will, Jake, and I to see you guys progressing so quickly!

        SVS Faculty Instructor
        www.leewhiteillustration.com

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        • Thrace
          Thrace last edited by Thrace

          Here is a compromise of all input I think, especially Lee's! I think its a big improvement.

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          • Lynn Larson
            Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

            Looks great! So different from the start! The most important is you are happy with it 😃

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            • DanetteDraws
              DanetteDraws last edited by

              @Thrace-Shirley-Mears This is looking great Thrace! My favourite is the rainbow sparkle broom haha

              The one thing I think you still need to massage is the moon - moons aren't yellow, and should be more of a blueish white (like in Lee's). Also - I think you changed the size of it - it was better before because now there's tangents on the edge with her hat and her bum.

              I like the bounced light you added in too from the bright sparkle bit - nice touch!

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              • Thrace
                Thrace last edited by Thrace

                Ok, fixed the tangent issue. I am going to do a version with the light green moon I just wanted this one for the magazine cover because I think this color moon looks more like Halloween.

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                • Naroth Kean
                  Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                  that looks beautiful! great job! I would only look into improving the witch color value on her face a bit, maybe a bit darker shadow around where the light source might be absent. Oh I also think the cat tail is bit too short for me.

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                  • Rich Green
                    Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                    Thrace the progress you have made is really wonderful. I love that you took all of the great feedback and suggestions and have really transformed this piece like this. Plus you learn so much about your art and your own skills along the way - isn't that part the best of all? And its knowledge you get to take with you on the next thing you work on and so on - I find it so exciting!

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                    • Thrace
                      Thrace @Rich Green last edited by Thrace

                      @Rich-Green yes, me too! thanks so much!!

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                      • Thrace
                        Thrace @Naroth Kean last edited by

                        @Naroth-Kean thanks I will work on it!

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                        • Rob Smith
                          Rob Smith last edited by

                          @Thrace-Shirley-Mears I think your image is really starting to turn into something special. Keep up the good work!

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                          • Thrace
                            Thrace @Rob Smith last edited by

                            @Rob-Smith Thank you so much!

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