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    • Lee White
      Lee White SVS Team SVS Instructor Pro SVS OG last edited by

      My pleasure! It's so fun for Will, Jake, and I to see you guys progressing so quickly!

      SVS Faculty Instructor
      www.leewhiteillustration.com

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      • Thrace
        Thrace last edited by Thrace

        Here is a compromise of all input I think, especially Lee's! I think its a big improvement.

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        • Lynn Larson
          Lynn Larson SVS OG last edited by

          Looks great! So different from the start! The most important is you are happy with it 😃

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          • DanetteDraws
            DanetteDraws last edited by

            @Thrace-Shirley-Mears This is looking great Thrace! My favourite is the rainbow sparkle broom haha

            The one thing I think you still need to massage is the moon - moons aren't yellow, and should be more of a blueish white (like in Lee's). Also - I think you changed the size of it - it was better before because now there's tangents on the edge with her hat and her bum.

            I like the bounced light you added in too from the bright sparkle bit - nice touch!

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            • Thrace
              Thrace last edited by Thrace

              Ok, fixed the tangent issue. I am going to do a version with the light green moon I just wanted this one for the magazine cover because I think this color moon looks more like Halloween.

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              • Naroth Kean
                Naroth Kean last edited by Naroth Kean

                that looks beautiful! great job! I would only look into improving the witch color value on her face a bit, maybe a bit darker shadow around where the light source might be absent. Oh I also think the cat tail is bit too short for me.

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                • Rich Green
                  Rich Green SVS OG last edited by

                  Thrace the progress you have made is really wonderful. I love that you took all of the great feedback and suggestions and have really transformed this piece like this. Plus you learn so much about your art and your own skills along the way - isn't that part the best of all? And its knowledge you get to take with you on the next thing you work on and so on - I find it so exciting!

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                  • Thrace
                    Thrace @Rich Green last edited by Thrace

                    @Rich-Green yes, me too! thanks so much!!

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                    • Thrace
                      Thrace @Naroth Kean last edited by

                      @Naroth-Kean thanks I will work on it!

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                      • Rob Smith
                        Rob Smith last edited by

                        @Thrace-Shirley-Mears I think your image is really starting to turn into something special. Keep up the good work!

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                        • Thrace
                          Thrace @Rob Smith last edited by

                          @Rob-Smith Thank you so much!

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