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    • CutPaper
      CutPaper last edited by

      Hello,
      Can you please critique this piece I’ve created in relation to the mushroom village prompt?
      I think the cut paper technique has given me more limitations than I anticipated, so there’s no spacial direction if that makes sense.

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      Thanks

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      • Jason Bowen
        Jason Bowen SVS OG @CutPaper last edited by

        @cutpaper Could you use a different colour for the ground plane? otherwise it looks a bit like everything is floating... hope that helps. Looks good I've never tried using cut paper before.

        https://www.instagram.com/jasonbowenoils/

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        • CutPaper
          CutPaper last edited by

          Yes, I think that might help. Thanks. I’ll play around and post back if it looks any better later.

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          • CutPaper
            CutPaper @Jason Bowen last edited by

            @jason-bowen said in Mushroom village- critique please:

            @cutpaper Could you use a different colour for the ground plane? otherwise it looks a bit like everything is floating... hope that helps. Looks good I've never tried using cut paper before.

            It’s a fun technique, but rather time consuming, although I’ve only recently started working this way, so might not have found the optimum way of working quickly.

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            • CutPaper
              CutPaper last edited by

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              Is this better? I’ve added shadows digitally.

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              • Larry Whitler
                Larry Whitler last edited by

                Very creative and original! I love the playfulness of your work. A child (and parent) would be enchanted turning the pages of a book illustrated by you. Love it!

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                • CutPaper
                  CutPaper @Larry Whitler last edited by

                  @larry-whitler said in Mushroom village- critique please:

                  Very creative and original! I love the playfulness of your work. A child (and parent) would be enchanted turning the pages of a book illustrated by you. Love it!

                  Thanks!! I have fun creating it this way, so I’m glad it shows through the work. I do need to find a way to use this technique in a quicker fashion, so I’m planning on experimenting how to do that these next few weeks.

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