Feedback please for Kickstarter page (launching July 2)

Rene Pfitzner · 3 Jul 2018, 05:15

Hi all!
I've just finished polishing up the rewards graphics and checking the links for my launch in a week's time.
It's a Kickstarter to get my webcomic printed as a graphic novel. It's called Sneaky Goblins.

If you can take a look and let me know if there's anything I've missed, that would be awesome! (the other day someone got back to me and said my pie-chart figures didn't add up- so thankful to that person!)

*Edit: The Kickstarter is now live!
Feedback still welcome though (you can edit the 'story' section after a campaign begins, but not the rewards or shipping)

www.tolcraft.com/kickstarter

Thanks guys!

TessaW · 3 Jul 2018, 05:02

It looks really good to me. The only thing I'm not the biggest fan of is your gif of the projects you contributed to. I thought my phone was making the pictures glitch, but then I realized it was animated. I just don't think it really adds to the overall style of everything else.

That being said, congratulations! It looks well put together and well thought out. It definitely seems like a legit project to back.

lei · 3 Jul 2018, 05:04

Well, it must be a good kickstarter pitch, coz I can't see why NOT to get a copy... I really want to back it! Now, to remember what my kickstarter login is.... tell us when it's live, OK!

JohnMK · 3 Jul 2018, 05:07

looks good to me. Really love your work, Rene. Reminds me of the Phoenix comic

Larry Whitler · 3 Jul 2018, 05:09

Oh my gosh! That looks so fun! You are going to bring joy to a lot of kids (and kids-at-heart) with your writing and illustrating talents. Very nicely done. Good luck.

Rene Pfitzner · 3 Jul 2018, 05:02

@tessaw Thanks Tessa! Yeah I wondered about that. Sometimes no gifs is better than gifs.

Rene Pfitzner · 3 Jul 2018, 05:04

@lei Thanks so much! Well that's always the aim when making a Kickstarter page-- try and remove all the reasons not to back! Those include- distrust, lack of urgency, not caring. If a page can address each of these, and if the book looks good, it should be golden!

Rene Pfitzner · 3 Jul 2018, 05:07

@johnmk The Phoenix looks really cool! I'll have to get into it. Thanks for the comparison!

Rene Pfitzner · 3 Jul 2018, 05:09

@larry-whitler Hey Larry thanks so much! The kickstarter is live now in fact! Cheers!