Hidden WIP ( Tom Shannon )

@tessaw Thank you Tessa for the input. I totally agree with you. I have a soft spot for Bigfoot too. How can you not living in the Northwest!?!? I like your points of view about the bee hive lady, there is more to the story I didn't really notice. Hmm. Good food for thought. Thank you again!

stringfellowart

I think I like #1 the most. But also #3 is also very creative

Chip Valecek

@tom-shannon I sorta like #2 the most.

Jon Anderson

I'm leaning towards #3 and #2 closely behind. Cool concepts!

Eli

Tough choice! They are all really good! I am leaning towards #1. I agree with @TessaW that it's full of great storytelling opportunities. It's cute and funny, and I'm a sucker for huge hair.

@Chip-Valecek @Jon-Anderson @Eli Thank you guys for the kind words!! I really appreciate it. I'm still on the fence between #1 and #2. I may do both, just for fun:-) This is a great forum for showing off WIP and chatting. I need to do more it. Thanks again! More to come...

Johanna Kim

Ohhh, these are all hilarious, and could all work brilliantly. I think you should do the one you'll have the most fun illustrating, but really, they all feel strong to me. If I had to choose just one, I think idea 1 with the mouse seems to most unique, surprising, and I love the humor.

@johanna-kim Thank you Johanna for the flattery. I'm warming up to #1!

Donfito

I like #1 because the concept is totally different or at least is something you don't expect, but my second choice would be #3 the simplicity of this one of the lines and the background , could be a great advantage to put a lots of details with textures with a big contrast of colors. Nice job.

braden H

I'm a big fan of number three for the story aspect, but I think it would be the toughest to get right. All three would work fine, though!

@art-of-b I agree with you. In context to a storybook, it could be a fun scene, but by itself, it's a little hard to read.

@Donfito I've decided to flush out concept #1. I don't know about keeping the idea of the mouse holding the knife and fork. It seems a little too "cutesy" to me. We'll see. I'll post a another WIP soon.

Thank you for the feedback!