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    • Chip Valecek
      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @Gary Wilkinson last edited by

      @gary-wilkinson I ran into the same issue with the color of the character with the color of a tree in one of my other pieces. What is a solution to something like that? I don't want a crazy color bear, do I lighten the tree color so the bear pops more?

      The story is just a bear enjoying the fall day. He is watching the leaves fall around him. I just haven't painted any of those yet.


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      • NessIllustration
        NessIllustration Pro @Chip Valecek last edited by

        @chip-valecek You can make subtle changes so that the colors stand out from each other even though it's still brown on brown. If it were me I'd make the bear a little redder, a little less saturated and a little darker. Then I'd add some bright yellow-ish lighting on top of the log, and some shading on the bear's bum.

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        • Jason Bowen
          Jason Bowen SVS OG last edited by

          Just my thoughts on your question. Trees have green and grey and dirty brown trunks sometimes Redish sometimes silver... choose your tree to fit your scene 😉

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          • TessaW
            TessaW last edited by

            Wow, I love the character design on this! His expression makes me laugh. He looks really entraptured by fall- just like me! I find myself agreeing with what has already been pointed out by everyone, so I don't have to much to add.

            As far as the storytelling aspect, I think @Gary-Wilkinson has a point. I think that maybe adding a leaf to his hand might be a quick solution to this problem, though I'd recommend changing the position of his hand completely. Then he looks like he is really engaged with his environment and it will suit is expression of wonder.

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            • braden H
              braden H last edited by

              I like it!

              The expression the bear is just perfectly hipster.

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              • chrisaakins
                chrisaakins @Chip Valecek last edited by

                @chip-valecek you could go grey on the tree. If you think about, with the exception of pines most trunks aren't really brown anyway.

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                • Chip Valecek
                  Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                  I made the changes to the bear and put done all my local color. Onto my favorite part... lights and shadows.

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                  • Heather Boyd
                    Heather Boyd @Chip Valecek last edited by Heather Boyd

                    @chip-valecek The wood or trees look on the cool side. The bear and the leaves are warm. I like a red wood or deep dark wood. It might bring some more warmth to those areas. I feel that because your bush leaves have all changed and still on (mid to late fall) your green grass is a harsh summer contrast. Either add some green to your bushes or lessen the intensity of the green grass. And one last thing I noticed, the leaf your bear is holding is orange with a noticeable brown stem (if that's the term) while all other leaves stay consistent. I hope I am making sense, lols.

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                    • Chip Valecek
                      Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG last edited by

                      Here is my final submitted piece.

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                      • NessIllustration
                        NessIllustration Pro last edited by

                        @Chip-Valecek That looks great, Chip! You really pushed this to the next level, great work!

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                        • Eli
                          Eli @Chip Valecek last edited by

                          @chip-valecek Love how he turned out! Well done

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                          • Sofie Schollaert
                            Sofie Schollaert last edited by Sofie Schollaert

                            @chip-valecek , love how it turned out. Especially the light coming through the trees!

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