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    Misunderstood monster concepts, help me pick?

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    • rcartwright
      rcartwright last edited by

      5 or 2 for me

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      • Martha Sue
        Martha Sue @TwiggyT last edited by

        @twiggyt Thank you!

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        • xin li
          xin li last edited by

          I vote for 5 also. I like the composition πŸ™‚

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          • Elizabeth Rose
            Elizabeth Rose last edited by

            yep I agree with everyone else: 5

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            • Martha Sue
              Martha Sue last edited by

              @rcartwright Thank you! I started on 5. πŸ™‚

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              • Martha Sue
                Martha Sue last edited by

                0_1540961578843_V1.png Hi illustration people, here's my paint. I'll turn it in tomorrow, notice anything I should adjust first?

                Thank you!

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                • LauraA
                  LauraA SVS OG @Martha Sue last edited by

                  @martha-sue Perhaps a bit of a warm glaze over some of the top parts, like maybe the hair or the skin? And perhaps lighten up the value a bit more behind the mouth to make it stand out, since that yawning cavern of a mouth is hilarious and has a great dimensionality! I would say to vary the line weight as well, but it may be too late for that, given that it's the 31st, so don't worry. It's just the I like your line work so much in your second round of sketches! Sorry, I only just saw this thread morning, but your concepts were all funny, and I liked 2 and 5 as compositions as well. Good luck!

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                  • ?
                    A Former User last edited by

                    Lovely work, I like your idea and composition! Sorry i'm a little late posting too, the one thing i'd say is keep her left arm in the scene as its a little distracting that it's off to the side, that might just be me though πŸ™‚

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                    • Martha Sue
                      Martha Sue @Guest last edited by

                      @hannahmccaffery Thank you! I did start a paint over of that πŸ™‚

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                      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Martha Sue last edited by

                        @martha-sue this is really cute! It’s giving me an Alice in Wonderland vibe.

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                        • Martha Sue
                          Martha Sue @LauraA last edited by Martha Sue

                          @lauraa Thank you! These are great suggestions. I might have time for those, we'll see. About the line quality, I have this gap between my traditional media line quality and digital. Also working on the difference between my fine art, and making a planned out illustration. I get cool line quality, and sometimes a good vibe to my traditional media work but it's like untamed and I can't get it to look like that when I thumbnail and plan things out. Onward I guess!

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                          • Martha Sue
                            Martha Sue @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                            @nyrrylcadiz Thank you! I was thinking about her dress and the rabbit house scene, just trying to get inspired to learn about backgrounds since I have avoided them in the past. πŸ™‚

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