14 Oct 2015, 23:53

This will be a fun illustration Rich! - my vote goes to the thumbnail version - the eye travels nicely around the page - in the value comp I feel like I am being pulled in many directions - Too early for this type of feedback I'm sure - but if you look at the point where the periscope exits the water it is shown as exiting right next to the glass - there is no water between where the periscope exits the water and the glass - this makes the front of the sub and the bend in the periscope that comes forward read as breaking the plane of the glass - look forward to seeing the next step!