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    Feed back welcome: book for 3-10 year olds

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    • Kikoe Art 0
      Kikoe Art 0 last edited by

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      I am starting a book for young kids, would love feedback on how to make it more kid friendly or cuter - this is the first illustration of the main setting for the story.

      Thanks!

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      • StudioLooong
        StudioLooong last edited by

        @Kikoe-Art-0 I love the warm colors, it gives off a happy calm vibe. One thing that doesn't make sense to me is that the grass and bushes are green and the tree has fruit on it, but no leaves. I cant tell what season it's supposed to be.

        Taylor Woolley
        (Formerly Taylor Ackerman / StudioLooong)


        Website: www.woolleystories.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/woolleystories/

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        • Kikoe Art 0
          Kikoe Art 0 last edited by

          @StudioLooong Thanks that's a good point !

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

            This already looks great. Nice colors. Simplicity is the way to go if you want to cater to younger kids and todlers.

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