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    • Heather Boyd
      Heather Boyd @theprairiefox last edited by

      @theprairiefox I like the 1st composition the best even though his father isn't in it. But the 2nd one you can push the faces on each.

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        Let's hear it for out of class practice 🙂

        I'm a big fan of #1 as well. It's got great potential for cupid's little nose just poking over/resting on the tabletop.

        What're your keeeeeeeywords?

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        • theprairiefox
          theprairiefox last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett You're right I should have put those on there! Doh!

          Keywords: Comfort & Hopeful optimism

          I had a hard time getting the feeling down to just a word...

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          • theprairiefox
            theprairiefox last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett I did run this through a concept map. That is how I came up with the idea. Worked really well. I will scan it in and attach it tomorrow for proof. 😉

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            • peteolczyk
              peteolczyk @theprairiefox last edited by

              @theprairiefox sorry for my ignorance but what’s a concept map?
              (I think I like number 2 as it could show the emotional response between the father and Cupid )

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              • theprairiefox
                theprairiefox @peteolczyk last edited by

                @peteolczyk A concept map is diagram of related words to allow you to come up with creative ideas around a subject. I will put mine up tomorrow so you can see.

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                • Anna- Charlotte Lörzer
                  Anna- Charlotte Lörzer last edited by

                  Hey! I like the first one best because of the perspective. I am curious about the look on young cupids face. Is it still said because of the broke arrow or hopeful because daddy is already there or a mix of both?

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                  • theprairiefox
                    theprairiefox last edited by

                    @peteolczyk and @Braden-Hallett here is my concept map for "Love".

                    Love_ConceptMap001.jpg

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                    • ?
                      A Former User last edited by

                      Number 2 or number 4 are great!

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                      • Raymond_Kaselau
                        Raymond_Kaselau @theprairiefox last edited by

                        @theprairiefox #2 is the clearest read for me. The size relationship of the cupid to father is defined. The left to right of the broken arrow and the tape is like a before and after, the solution is easy to read. Cool concept! hmmm, what else is on the handy dad workbench 😉

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                        • peteolczyk
                          peteolczyk @theprairiefox last edited by

                          @theprairiefox thanks for that, I think I know it as a mind map. Thanks for replying

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                          • theprairiefox
                            theprairiefox last edited by

                            Thanks all, I am doing a combination of #2 and #4. I think it should work well. Mostly #2 but framed like #4.

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