March Book Cover WIP
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Hello all!
WIP, silhouettes are doing my head in! Something is way off, maybe its them maybe its something! else....
Fresh eyes to critique please!
Thank you kindly x
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@rachelpenman I think your buildings are good. For the monkey the left hip/butt seem to be out a little far and the girl's right hip seems to be out a little far. Maybe bringing them in a little will help your silhouette.
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The girl's left arm looks too small
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@rachelpenman - A very nice illustration of this story.
The alignment of the monkeys torso with the legs seem to be a bit off. His right leg doesn't seem in quite the right alignment with the way he is reaching for the little girl.
For the little girl, I think the proportions as @Taigyo mentioned. I also think that for the direction she is facing toward the monkey there might be a bit more twist in her body and I'm not seeing the pinch on the right side indicating that twist.
I agree with @Chip-Valecek - the buildings are really nice! I hope this helps.
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@Chip-Valecek Thank you for the feedback, appreciate it. The only thing i like on this is the buildings....i need to work some more!
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@Taigyo thanks for the feedback, i agree, to be honest i dont like the figures at all.... a rework is needed i think.... i like the buildings though!
