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    • nkdrawings
      nkdrawings last edited by nkdrawings

      Hi everyone! I was hoping to get some quick feedback on this little spot illustration I'm working on just for fun. It's done in watercolor. My question is, would this benefit from some line work to define things, or do you like it the way it is?
      IMG_20190405_000658.jpg

      Here's also an image of the first little sketch/color study I did in my sketchbook before turning it into a watercolor:

      IMG_20190404_174922_424.jpg

      What do you think? Leave it as it is, or add line work? (If you have other feedback, I'll appreciate that as well!) Thank you so much!

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      • Julia
        Julia last edited by

        Maybe you can add colored lines? you would keep the softness of the first drawing. I would keep the aquarium and water as it is. I am curious to know if others have different tips / opinions!

        https://www.instagram.com/julia.nsw/

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        • ?
          A Former User last edited by

          @nkdrawings I think the painting itself is strong enough without line work. I think you could shape and define the edges much better using the watercolour.

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