Post Video Critique Re-do
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I'm very grateful for the advice from @Lee-White and thought I'd share my attempts at addressing some of the issues he mentioned:
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I like how you’ve smoothed the tree and darkened the area around the salamander. Beautiful!
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Thank you!
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I really like the texture in this piece. I can't stop looking at the squirrel's tail lol. I like how you darkened the tail and the salamander, the piece reads much better because of it. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth: And smoothing out the tree really gets the squirrel to pop out more
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@DarleneAnico Thank you. I appreciate your comment