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    Chandelier or no chandelier?

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    • Laurasketches
      Laurasketches last edited by

      I vote Chandelier! nice work!

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      • theprairiefox
        theprairiefox last edited by

        I would vote chandelier as well. But if you squint it down you really can't see the chandelier. Like @Chip-Valecek said it is getting lost. I would take his suggestion and move it but, I think I would make more of it so the lighter value comes through stronger as well.

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        • animatosoor
          animatosoor last edited by

          The chandelier adds a lot of movement/action to this drawing. I would also say keep it, but use values later on to keep it from crowding the rest of the picture.

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          • avfarrar
            avfarrar last edited by

            I vote chandelier, too. It really does add that motion that @animatosoor was talking about!
            And add values (contrast) like painting light reflecting on the black lines of the chandelier so that it pops a little from the background. I agree it may be a step better left for the later stages of your drawing once you've really have all of the other values of the room decided. That way you don't accidentally create too much contrast on the chandelier that it becomes the only thing you want to focus your eye on in the picture.
            You are doing a great job. I love the life in this piece and can't wait to see what it will look like when it's finished!

            There is beauty in life!

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            • Annemieke
              Annemieke SVS OG last edited by

              Like everyone else I would keep the chandelier. It gives a lot of movement to the painting. If you feel it gets too busy you might consider to remove the wall-candles, or maybe tone down the murals on the wall in the back..

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              • Sofie Schollaert
                Sofie Schollaert last edited by

                I agree with everyone... chandelier in 🙂

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                • demotlj
                  demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                  I finally finished this (I think.). I left the chandelier in but simplified it and made the brackets thicker. I’m not sure I would choose these colors again for the ballroom because it was hard to get the animals, which are all shades of brown, to stand out, but I think I’m going to call it done unless you see something really obvious that I need to fix.

                  Thanks for your help.

                  94298DFA-6F46-4E44-A7E1-9D66664FCDD2.jpeg

                  Laurie DeMott
                  instagram.com/demotlj

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                  • animatosoor
                    animatosoor @demotlj last edited by animatosoor

                    @demotlj Great job on this! I loved seeing how you progressed from your initial sketch. The ballroom walls almost look golden, so I think the colour choices work great there; the gold gives it a sense of grandeur. It's a very dynamic piece overall, too!

                    https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/

                    The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"

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                    • demotlj
                      demotlj SVS OG @animatosoor last edited by

                      @animatosoor Thanks! I definitely learned a lot about how to improve my process and realized how much more I still have to learn! It was a good challenge.

                      Laurie DeMott
                      instagram.com/demotlj

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                      • MOO
                        MOO SVS OG @demotlj last edited by

                        @demotlj chandelier.

                        Marsha Ottum Owen

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