Finishing Drills for a Chronic Dabbler.
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Here are my updates! These are the changes I've made after the last round of feedback:
- I increased the distance between the top of the flame and top edge of the picture to avoid a tangent.
- I tried making some of the leaves on the trees and bushes slightly brighter.
- I explored two different gestures for the flame's hands:
Critique is always welcome!
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It looks still great, I like the fire hands before, these little sharp long fingers...
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Thank you, @MichaelaH! I've retained the long, sharp fingers. I just wanted to block in the arm placement in the above post, haha.
This is what I have now.:
https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/
The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"
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@animatosoor Something doesn't fit with the right hand, now. Maybe the right elbow doesn't fit the wrist angle. I love the long sharp fingers.
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@MichaelaH I had a hard time figuring out the angle, haha. You were right about it being skewed. I went ahead and rendered three different versions of the flame's hands so we can see them side by side.
1: original
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3:
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If the face goes like in 2. than the right should be maybe more hidden. Hmm...
Hope it is ok, I draw over. I like the wrist and fingers from 2.picture the most, than from the 3.th picture. Shoulder and back I like the most from 1th.
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@MichaelaH It's completely fine - I really appreciate the paint-over! Thank you so much. I'm going to try out retaining the shoulder and back from #1 and the fingers from #2. I completely forgot I'd left the face in in the above post. XD
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Trying this, where I'm going easy on the foreground.:
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I think I liked it with the tree better, there was this feeling of taking a secret peek at them through the bushes. Will You do the face of the fire spirit? I like it without, because it let me think about what the spirit looks like...hi hi hi
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Thank you, @MichaelaH! I can't decide whether I should have the trees left in or not, but have saved two different versions and like them both for the different reasons you've stated. XD It's Monday here and in the spirit of "Finished, not Perfect," I'm going to post my two versions. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:
I like the fire without the face, and left it in accidentally in that other post. There is no face in the final.
Because these are all potentially going to be portfolio pieces, I'm more than willing to continue fixing them as and when I think of things to improve on.Final(s):
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Finished another flower lady last week. Still working on the next one.
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@ThisKateCreates I'm really liking these Flower Ladies!
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Week 7:
I'm working out solutions for this idea I have. It is going to be a series of 3 illustrations inspired by a short story I love called The Shadow. I think it's not going to be great for children story-wise, but I'm really excited about illustrating this anyhow. :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:
Exploratory sketches:
https://www.instagram.com/sooryajart/
The Beatles: "Roll up, roll up for the Mystery Tour!"
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@animatosoor I'm liking the shapes of the figures you're creating! Best of luck with this project!
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Thank you, @Alicja-W!
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@animatosoor The face is really cutely drawn. Look forward to seeing it in more detail.
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Thank you, @ThisKateCreates!
This is my progress so far on The Shadow. There are a number of things I'm still trying to work out at this stage: the design of the shadow, both the characters' poses and expressions, and the overall composition. In my thumbnails I've pretty much narrowed my options for composition down to what I have here, but there's still more problem-solving for me to do.
Any feedback would be more than welcome!
I've also got to get started on the July SVS prompt, haha.
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This looks great, the shadow...huhu hu u
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I am very excited to see where this is going, might need to dig out that short story! Oooooooh.
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@MichaelaH Thank you, Michaela. I shall share it once I've gotten my thumbnails together, hehe.
