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    September prompt WIP. Feedback always welcome :)

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    • braden H
      braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

      @chrisaakins Thanks, man 😊 I was a substitute teacher for a couple years, actually.

      I'm not gonna get into the exact reasons why I quit, but with the way the BC education system is going I'm glad I got out when I did, lol πŸ™‚

      BUT ANYHOO I'm happy doin' this thing for a while πŸ˜ƒ

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      • braden H
        braden H last edited by

        Haven't fixed the steerin' wheel yet. This one's gonna be down to the friggin' wire :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_cold_sweat:

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

          @Braden-Hallett the inking alone is already amazing!

          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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          • Phil Cullen
            Phil Cullen last edited by

            This is looking so freakin cool, nice work!

            www.instagram.com/phillip.cullen/
            www.facebook.com/phillipcullenillustration/

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            • Dima Eichhorn
              Dima Eichhorn @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett Great work as always.

              https://www.instagram.com/dima_eichhorn/

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              • braden H
                braden H last edited by

                @Nyrryl-Cadiz @Phil-Cullen @Dima-Eichhorn Thanks guys πŸ˜ƒ

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                • braden H
                  braden H last edited by

                  Front row left to right is:

                  Madame Weatherwax
                  Fitspatrick
                  Waddles
                  Skratchy
                  Monsieur Dents de la Mer
                  Art-bot v1.1
                  Yorick (way too on-the-nose, but whatevs πŸ™‚ )
                  Bink

                  Back row left to right

                  Mr. 'Z'
                  Mako (lower)
                  Gabby (upper)
                  Jay
                  Ethan
                  Douglas (lower
                  Lily
                  Sebby
                  'Ristopher
                  Noah (upper)
                  Angela
                  Candice
                  Cato (lower)
                  Kyler (upper)
                  Ichabod
                  Jyff
                  Halley

                  I'm hoping to have it almost all painted by the end of tomorrow πŸ˜ƒ

                  And if I don't, I'm adding some more tone and handing it in black and white.

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                  • peteolczyk
                    peteolczyk @braden H last edited by

                    @Braden-Hallett that’s amazing Braden

                    www.peteolczykillustrations.com

                    www.instagram.com/pete_illustrations

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                      Amanda Jean last edited by

                      LOVING THIS! :smiling_face_with_open_mouth:
                      There's so much happening and it all fits so well.

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                      • braden H
                        braden H last edited by

                        @peteolczyk @Amanda-Jean thanks guys πŸ™‚

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                        • braden H
                          braden H last edited by

                          Hooray for colour vomit πŸ˜ƒ

                          Rendering is about half done or so. Gonna work a bit more today and try and finish it off tomorrow.

                          So many skin tones...

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                          • peteolczyk
                            peteolczyk @braden H last edited by

                            @Braden-Hallett that is so good Braden. I really like the peculiar shapes of the shark and the monkey. I could look at that picture for ages there’s so much happening.

                            www.peteolczykillustrations.com

                            www.instagram.com/pete_illustrations

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                            • chrisaakins
                              chrisaakins last edited by

                              @Braden-Hallett I only see one serious flaw: None of the kids have cell phones recording this event. Although if they did have cell phones, none of them would notice it. πŸ™‚

                              Chris Akins
                              www.chrisakinsart.com
                              www.instagram.com/chrisakinsart/

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                              • Chip Valecek
                                Chip Valecek SVS Team SVS OG @chrisaakins last edited by

                                @chrisaakins That would have been a great gag to have one kid on his cell phone completely unaware of what was happening.


                                https://www.instagram.com/chipvalecek/
                                https://www.facebook.com/cvalecek
                                http://www.cshellmedia.com/

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                                • braden H
                                  braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                                  @chrisaakins I a bygone era, before the cellphone πŸ™‚ The golden age of school bus shenanigans.

                                  @Chip-Valecek Damn I wish I'd thought of that :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: Ah well. Too late now πŸ™‚

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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H last edited by

                                    Okeedokee! Time to put it away for a few hours πŸ˜ƒ

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                                    • theprairiefox
                                      theprairiefox @braden H last edited by

                                      @Braden-Hallett Looking good.

                                      A couple of minor thoughts... not sure how right they are.

                                      1. Driver's nose seems too red to me. Almost distracting.

                                      2. I am not digging the grass color. Not sure what to do about it, but it is throwing me off of the whole picture.

                                      I do love the piece though, you make the hard look easy... you are killing it as usual.

                                      -The Prairie Fox
                                      https://www.instagram.com/theprairiefox
                                      https://www.theprairiefox.com

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                                      • peteolczyk
                                        peteolczyk last edited by

                                        I’m really enjoying this piece Braden. Just a thought with the grass, the higher saturation to the left seems to be taking my eye off the page. (The saturation could just be my device settings )

                                        www.peteolczykillustrations.com

                                        www.instagram.com/pete_illustrations

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                                        • ArtofAleksey
                                          ArtofAleksey last edited by

                                          My eyes are drawn to the right side of the piece because of the bright yellow and green and the woman on the left could use either better contrast or a thicker outline because she blends in with all the other stuff.

                                          instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
                                          alekseyillustration.com

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                                          • braden H
                                            braden H @theprairiefox last edited by

                                            @theprairiefox I'm definitely gonna play with the grass colour. It's very neon πŸ™‚

                                            @peteolczyk It is most certainly not your device settings. That grass is positively glowing :smiling_face_with_open_mouth_closed_eyes: Definitely gonna knock it back a bit.

                                            @Aleksey Iiiiiiiinteresting! I think I'll knock the sign back (and I'm gonna fade the background characters a little as well). I'll do what i can to make her dress a bit brighter, too.

                                            Thanks everyone πŸ˜ƒ

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