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    Writing critique group for Writing Picture Books by Ann Whitford Paul?

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    • theprairiefox
      theprairiefox @TessaW last edited by

      @TessaW I think you are right... after rereading the post I would agree @alexdixon looks like a spammer.

      Though I would be interested in walking through the writing exercises if others would want to too...

      Are you interested @TessaW?

      -The Prairie Fox
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      • RG Spaulding
        RG Spaulding last edited by

        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen ,@theprairiefox ,@TessaW , I would be interested in an author-illustrator online critique group if you are. Right now I have an in-person author critique group and online group and trying to form an in-person author-illustrator group also but not sure how it will go yet. My current groups have been more on the writer side than illo side. I have taken "Making picture book magic" by Susanna Leonard Hill" and belong to 12x12challenge.com and some other online forums.

        RGSpaulding
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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          Yup. Looks like 'essay kings' is doing some guerrilla marketing 🙂

          I've actually started listening to the course as well! My local critique group has utterly fizzled, but an online one could work.

          I'd be interested in doin' this along with whatever other group run throughs I do 🙂

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          • theprairiefox
            theprairiefox @braden H last edited by

            @Braden-Hallett can we make private threads on the forums? I would like my work to be only viewable by those participating (mostly for protection). It is pretty easy to lift text...

            Otherwise, we could use google docs and only allow access to those docs to members of the crit group.

            Any thoughts?

            -The Prairie Fox
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            • NicolaSchofield
              NicolaSchofield @theprairiefox last edited by

              @theprairiefox @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen @Braden-Hallett I'd also love to be part of this if you figure out how to get something set up. I've had Ann Whitford Paul's book for a while and halfheartedly tried to work through the exercises but I didn't get far with only myself for accountability and motivation!

              Nicola Schofield

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              • RG Spaulding
                RG Spaulding @theprairiefox last edited by

                @theprairiefox , I suggest private FB group(for discussing) and a dropbox for loading docs/illo or just sharing google docs with each other. I have another group like this and this works pretty well. We comment on the private FB group that we have loaded a doc for critique and then we go to dropbox to see and critique. I am open to other suggestions also.

                RGSpaulding
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                • RG Spaulding
                  RG Spaulding last edited by

                  Will this group be only for going through Ann Whitford Paul's book or for critique group for author/illustrator where we can exchange MS/dummies for critique?

                  RGSpaulding
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                  • Coley
                    Coley last edited by

                    I'm interested in this. Whatever form it takes. The SVS course and/or crit group. @Braden-Hallett would discord work for this if we wanted it sort of private?

                    https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                    • TessaW
                      TessaW last edited by

                      That would be a "maybe" for me. It's something I'm definitely interested in. I don't currently have any dummies in the works- though I do have some ideas on the edge of my mind. Not sure if I could dive in on one yet, but I would be up for offering feedback.

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                      • ArtofAleksey
                        ArtofAleksey last edited by

                        This sounds fun I have an idea for a kids book of an old russian fairy tale i loved. But im drawn to doing it as a comic. Although this might be interesting to try.. oof decisions

                        instagram and twitter: @artofaleksey
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                        • MOO
                          MOO SVS OG @RG Spaulding last edited by

                          @RG-Spaulding I have a similar fb group and we run it the same way. It works well.

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                          • theprairiefox
                            theprairiefox @TessaW last edited by

                            @TessaW that would be perfect for going through Ann Whitford Paul's class. It really helps you go from scratch (or just an idea) to an edited manuscript.

                            @RG-Spaulding I would prefer to walk through the class instead of an open critique group. That way we can hold each other accountable to something specific. This will provide some structure initially.

                            It is an 8-week class, I would suggest we follow that structure (the 9th week was critiques). And we do the homework assigned for each week, it is reviewed the next week.

                            I am not sure how other groups have done reviews, we could assign 2 reviewers for each of us each week. Then we can get and provide meaningful feedback with feeling too overwhelmed. We can rotate this as well so throughout the course we are all reviewing each other's work. I am willing to set a schedule once we have members and a start date.

                            Thoughts?

                            -The Prairie Fox
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                            • RG Spaulding
                              RG Spaulding @theprairiefox last edited by

                              @theprairiefox , Do we have to join a class to go through the lessons? Or is it in her book? I have her book "Writing picture books by Ann Whitford Paul" but I have only read it sporadically. I am open to it, but in order to get uninterrupted 8 weeks, I can only do it after the new year since we are in and out of town for the holidays.

                              RGSpaulding
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                              • MOO
                                MOO SVS OG @RG Spaulding last edited by

                                @RG-Spaulding The lessons are in the book.

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                                • MOO
                                  MOO SVS OG last edited by MOO

                                  I think, if I do it, I would need to draw it out a little more, not a lesson a week because I have a lot of other projects going on. Also, I do have a writing critique group I'm involved with since I posted the query 2 years ago. We are not always really active on it. We kind of post things when we feel like it and have time and then respond. Everyone is very busy. It seems hard to keep a group like this going consistently strong. I got involved with another critique group and we do absolutley nothng on that one. I tried an in person group and it quickly fizzled to nothing. I would like to watch the class again too. I have several unfinished classes I need to work on also. I might want to participate but I might not be able to keep up...we could try though!

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                                  • xin li
                                    xin li last edited by

                                    Yes. I am interested in joining in a critc group online as well. I have a hard time finding one, or starting one physically in my town. I am willing to set aside time for this once we have a date.
                                    My wish is to form a long term online critic group where we can figure out some ways to make it constructive, and useful for all kinds of personal children's book projects. But starting with Ann's class as a structure sounds very wise. @theprairiefox.

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                                    • MichaelaH
                                      MichaelaH last edited by

                                      I have to say, I was suprised I missed this class, didn't know there is "Writing Picture Books" class on svs. No that I know, I am also interessted in joining the critic group.
                                      @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen How is the book different to the class? I am thinking if I should buy it, maybe I should at forst look at the class.

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                                      • MOO
                                        MOO SVS OG @MichaelaH last edited by MOO

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                                        • Coley
                                          Coley last edited by

                                          @RG-Spaulding and @MichaelaH I started this class and got maybe 4 or 5 lessons in a few months ago before summer hit and I got busy with my kids, but just in terms of her book..........you don't HAVE to have it for the class though she does assign readings from it each lesson. It is a supplement to the work, there is other work besides that. I don;t have the book and was still learning a lot.

                                          https://www.instagram.com/nicoleledrewmay/

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                                          • RG Spaulding
                                            RG Spaulding @Coley last edited by

                                            @Coley , Thank you. I have this book. I will try to read it again. Would everyone who is interested in say when they want to start? I can start after the new year.

                                            @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen, Yes, I belong to some groups also that fizzled after a few months. It is a trial and error. My inperson group is pretty good for writers and we are starting another in-person for illo soon, fingers crossed for it to work.

                                            RGSpaulding
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