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    Critique my recent work please?

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      A Former User last edited by

      turret.jpg cave.jpg

      These are my latest two paintings I did in gouache. They are 14"x 7" on watercolor paper. They are sci-fi scenes I thought would look cool. The first being a Turret on a hill and the second a spaceship in a cave. Please say ANYTHING that comes to mind. Thank you 🙂

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      • Judy Elizabeth Wilson
        Judy Elizabeth Wilson SVS OG last edited by

        Hey Ben. I really like how you have the warm areas and cool areas in the paintings. What comes to mind is that the focal points, the turret and spaceship could have areas with a touch more focus and/or detail that would make them really stand out against the great backgrounds. Brilliant work. 🌟

        Website http://www.judyelizabethwilson.com/

        Instagram https://www.instagram.com/judyelizabethart/

        Sharing positivity through art.

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          A Former User last edited by

          Thank you so much! I'll keep this in mind

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