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    • chrisaakins
      chrisaakins @aska last edited by

      @aska I love it. I was thinking there looked to be faces and then I realized it was supposed to. Good job.

      Chris Akins
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      • Eywin
        Eywin last edited by

        I really like this and the idea of the faces. 🙂

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        • KaraDaniel
          KaraDaniel last edited by

          Interesting idea. I saw the faces then read your words so it's showing what you intended!

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          • aska
            aska last edited by

            @chrisaakins @Eywin @KaraDaniel Thank you! That's motivating me to finish it 🙂

            Aska
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            • aska
              aska @aska last edited by

              Here is my progress. Any comments appreciated 🙂svs_january3.jpg

              Aska
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              • NicolaSchofield
                NicolaSchofield @aska last edited by

                @aska I think possibly I'm just being a bit slow / blind but I can't see where the footprints are?

                Nicola Schofield

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                • aska
                  aska @NicolaSchofield last edited by

                  @neschof cause there are none 🙂 Thats a problem. My idea was to make it look like one of the mountains went for a walk but i guess it looks more like river than mountain-prints...

                  Aska
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                  • NicolaSchofield
                    NicolaSchofield @aska last edited by

                    @aska ah, yes, I thought it was a river, I can see now though. Maybe adding a front edge to the nearest footprint would help? Just now it looks like maybe it is a river that flows down a little waterfall.

                    Nicola Schofield

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                    • Jennyann
                      Jennyann last edited by

                      Hi. I think the footprints need to be defined more. I'm assuming they are the lines in the center going towards the moon. I like the palette you chose, and the luminous light as well. I'm still working on my lighting too, so maybe someone else could help. Would the moonlight wrap or hit the top of the figure's head and outline some of the planes in the mountains? Would it also affect the light the figure is holding?

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                      • aska
                        aska @Jennyann last edited by

                        @neschof @Jennyann thank you for comments 🙂 how about now?

                        Aska
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                        • aska
                          aska @aska last edited by

                          @aska svs_january6.jpg

                          Aska
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                          • Jennyann
                            Jennyann @aska last edited by Jennyann

                            Hi @askaaska.png

                            Looks good. I like the addition of the cool shadows around the figure. Now, I think you just need some more contrast or dark in some spaces and under things that curve. Lastly some directional light in your piece.

                            Heres another example. You'res probably looks better. However, I was trying to show or imagine where the mountains would cast their shadows on and around each other, and draw the path towards the center or the moon.

                            aska.jpg

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                            • aska
                              aska @Jennyann last edited by

                              @Jennyann thank you! I kind of gave up on this drawing.. I felt it was not easy to understand my concept. However now with your correction, i should probably come back to it, so your time is not wasted 😉

                              Aska
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                              • Jennyann
                                Jennyann last edited by

                                No Problem, I'm happy it helped.

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