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      seanwelty @Sharon Sordo last edited by

      @Sharon-Sordo I really like what you have started here. I looked at your previous posts and tend to like your work better at the sketch stage. Once rendered some of the energy of the piece gets lost. I look forward to seeing this piece develop.

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      • bharris
        bharris last edited by

        I can tell this is going to be fun! Good job on the angles and interest!

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        • shinjifujioka
          shinjifujioka SVS OG last edited by

          Really liking your attention to detail for the background. Are those eyeballs???

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          • MOO
            MOO SVS OG last edited by

            I like it. The right corner doesn't bother me. Depending on how bad the explosion is, she might want to look more animated. If it's just a poof, it fits but if it's a big bang I think she needs a more shocked looking expression and maybe her arm would be up higher or more in front of her face...something like that.

            Marsha Ottum Owen

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            • Lee Holland
              Lee Holland last edited by

              Love the fact that your shelves are leading the eye into the picture and pointing at the characters. nice

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              • Leontine
                Leontine last edited by

                Lovely piece, your on the right track here! I like the 'kind spookyness' children love that !

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                • Sharon Sordo
                  Sharon Sordo last edited by

                  @seanwelty Really? I've never thought about that. I'll have to look back at my sketching and compare it to the finished piece. Thanks for pointing it out!

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                  • Sharon Sordo
                    Sharon Sordo last edited by

                    @bharris Thanks so much! I was really trying to step out of my front-view comfort zone. Having the same pov every time gets repetitive.

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                    • Sharon Sordo
                      Sharon Sordo last edited by

                      @shinjifujioka Yes, I love adding detail in interiors it tells more about the character without having to say much. Haha, yes they are eyeballs. She's a witch so she has witchy things?! lol

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                      • Sharon Sordo
                        Sharon Sordo last edited by

                        @Marsha-Kay-Ottum-Owen Yeah, I wanted it to be more of a poof. I guess if I wanted to do the explosion then she would have to be shielding her eyes or something.

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                        • Sharon Sordo
                          Sharon Sordo last edited by

                          @Lee-Holland Thank you!

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                          • Sharon Sordo
                            Sharon Sordo last edited by

                            @Leontine I didn't want to make it too scary, so I tried to add a little comedy with the explosion. I'm also thinking of making the explosion a vibrant color like a pink or green.

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                            • Leontine
                              Leontine @Sharon Sordo last edited by

                              @Sharon-Sordo I think it isn't scary as in in scary, but more like nicely spooky, the way that children like. They love eyeballs and stuff like that!

                              Leontine
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                              • Sharon Sordo
                                Sharon Sordo last edited by

                                Witch-2g.jpg

                                Working on the lighting and values. I want it to be night outside. I was also thinking of having some moon rays coming in through the ceiling just so the bg wouldn't be so dark.

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                                • Naroth Kean
                                  Naroth Kean last edited by

                                  really like the busy but yet not busy image because there is a good focus point there! Love their expressions as well.

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                                  • smoke
                                    smoke last edited by

                                    Yeah!! GREAT!! the values are great now!! love it, love it, love it!!

                                    smoke

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                                    • Sharon Sordo
                                      Sharon Sordo last edited by

                                      @Naroth-Kean Awesome thanks! I like to add so much detail, but i have to tone it down with the values lol

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                                      • Sharon Sordo
                                        Sharon Sordo last edited by

                                        Witch-2h.jpg

                                        Finally adding color...err roughly, haha. I see the plants on the bottom are still a little dark.

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                                        • Shelley_Couvi
                                          Shelley_Couvi last edited by

                                          Oh I love this! It's super adorable!

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                                            seanwelty @Sharon Sordo last edited by

                                            @Sharon-Sordo this is a great start. I like how the background is coming together. I look forward to seeing this piece progress. I assume as you progress that you will be knocking down most of the fully saturated colors and finding areas of emphasis to have pops of color.

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