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    WIP the stage was rattling breaking and falling apart.

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    • EliaMurrayArt
      EliaMurrayArt last edited by

      So excited to see this come together!

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      • braden H
        braden H @EliaMurrayArt last edited by

        @EliaMurrayArt πŸ˜ƒ

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        • braden H
          braden H last edited by

          Didn't like the dead centre focal point. Wanted more room for more mayhem. Decided this is Cinderella. Remembered that I can have a literal spotlight on my focal point since it's a stage.

          Timmy is in deep, DEEP trouble.

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          • braden H
            braden H last edited by

            I keep telling myself I'll do something simple. And then I don't. Blurgh...

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            • EliaMurrayArt
              EliaMurrayArt @braden H last edited by

              @Braden-Hallett I like this better too.

              I wonder if you have tried playing more with the falling kiddos up top. Right now they are all in a similar line and relatively equally spaced. Perhaps one could be dangling higher up? or something.

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              • Georgios Christopoulos
                Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                @Braden-Hallett It s pretty awesome !Really liking the composition so far!thanks for sharing the proccess!

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                • braden H
                  braden H @EliaMurrayArt last edited by

                  @EliaMurrayArt said in WIP the stage was rattling breaking and falling apart.:

                  @Braden-Hallett I like this better too.

                  I wonder if you have tried playing more with the falling kiddos up top. Right now they are all in a similar line and relatively equally spaced. Perhaps one could be dangling higher up? or something.

                  I think you're right! I'll add a kid clinging to a rope or somesuch πŸ™‚ Thanks!

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                  • braden H
                    braden H @Georgios Christopoulos last edited by

                    @Georgios-Christopoulos Thanks man!

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                    • Ryan Ehr
                      Ryan Ehr last edited by

                      This is a great piece already! My only thought is to use less contrast in the background. Mute them down a bit so the kid in the spotlight becomes more of the centerpiece.

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                      • Neha Rawat
                        Neha Rawat last edited by

                        Aw man! I was doing the same stage scene! πŸ˜… Yours is waaay more chaotic! I love how dynamic it is!
                        Yeah I'd put everything else in some shadow so that the spotlight stands out more. Love to see how this develops!

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                          @Braden-Hallett haa! The grand finale! Don’t forget to make it magical. πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚ I’m so excited for this one.

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                          • braden H
                            braden H @Ryan Ehr last edited by

                            @Ryan-Ehrenberg said in WIP the stage was rattling breaking and falling apart.:

                            This is a great piece already! My only thought is to use less contrast in the background. Mute them down a bit so the kid in the spotlight becomes more of the centerpiece.

                            Absolutely! the kiddos int he background are going to have similar saturation and values in their costumes to the other things in the background (won't be black sihl figures πŸ™‚ )

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                            • braden H
                              braden H @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                              @Nyrryl-Cadiz said in WIP the stage was rattling breaking and falling apart.:

                              Don’t forget to make it magical.

                              OH MY GOSH I NEED TO ADD GLITTER! ALL THE GLITTER!

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                              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by

                                @Braden-Hallett yessss!!!!

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                                • chrisaakins
                                  chrisaakins last edited by

                                  @Braden-Hallett At first I thought they were monkeys and then realized they weren't. And then I thought, MONKEYS!!! That would be a perfect reason everything was shaking rattling and falling apart. I could see some kid thinking they would liven up the show.

                                  Chris Akins
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                                  • braden H
                                    braden H @chrisaakins last edited by

                                    @chrisaakins monkeys would make for an excellent illustration as well! So, so many monkeys.

                                    Just a forlorn looking kid standing in the middle of a monkey *^&%storm with a zoo key clutched in his little hand, lol

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