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    • sarahlash
      sarahlash @baileyvidler last edited by

      @baileymvidler Yes to the house breaking. And maybe stuff flying out of the windows?

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      • Kateryna Shebanits
        Kateryna Shebanits @baileyvidler last edited by

        @baileymvidler, I like the 3a most. Do you think it would help is the fairy was looking in the direction of the woodpecker when it opens the door?
        Good luck with your work!

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        • TessaW
          TessaW @baileyvidler last edited by

          @baileymvidler Yeah, that will be a little tricky! Maybe a few things falling out of the door. . . a window shutter or window flower box about to fall off. . . a welcome mat/sign falling off the porch. . .a door decoration swinging from the door. Just throwing out some ideas. 🙂

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          • deborah Haagenson
            deborah Haagenson last edited by

            I was thinking 3b, but you've all sold me on 3a. I like the idea of the bird house falling apart. Actually, these are all really good ideas. What an imagination you have ☺!

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            • chrisaakins
              chrisaakins last edited by

              @baileymvidler I like 3b because you can see everything. What if you have the front of the house falling off? Great idea!

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              • baileyvidler
                baileyvidler last edited by

                Aaaaand values! Drawing motion is challenging. Need to add more stuff breaking, methinks.

                Rattling WIP-2.jpg

                Bailey Vidler
                Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                • TessaW
                  TessaW last edited by TessaW

                  OOOooOOo, this is looking good! Yeah, I think you're right. It needs a little more breaking.

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                  • baileyvidler
                    baileyvidler @TessaW last edited by

                    @TessaW Thanks! I really like your suggestions from your previous post. I will try to incorporate those next!

                    Bailey Vidler
                    Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                    • baileyvidler
                      baileyvidler last edited by

                      I had a major breakthrough working on the lineart, that I definitely needed to share.

                      Normally, I work on lines using the hard round brush in Photoshop. However, the edges on good ol' hard round are too perfect which leads me to the trap of treating the piece like a vector image. I get ridiculously caught up in zooming in to infinity to make sure the edges of my lineart are crisp and precise. (Which is impossible in a raster image.)

                      So, this time, I used a "pencil" brush, which has a rough edge and has opacity variation, and it eliminated my irrational need for pixel perfection. Zoomed out, it looks fine, and makes it easier for me to work without zooming in too far.

                      Has anyone else ever had to deal with zooming in too far?

                      @Kateryna-Shebanits Thanks for the suggestion, it definitely helps having the fairy looking towards the woodpecker!

                      Fairy and Woodpecker WIP-3.jpg

                      Bailey Vidler
                      Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

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                      • Heather Boyd
                        Heather Boyd @baileyvidler last edited by

                        @baileymvidler I like the unique story of three as well. But I enjoyed the intense composition of number 1 -you had me on my toes.

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                        • TessaW
                          TessaW last edited by

                          Wow! This is turning out amazing. The line quality looks great!

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                          • baileyvidler
                            baileyvidler @Heather Boyd last edited by

                            @Heather-Boyd Thanks! I still really like 1 as well. I may come back to that concept in the future.

                            @TessaW Thanks! 😁

                            Bailey Vidler
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                            • chrisaakins
                              chrisaakins @baileyvidler last edited by

                              @baileymvidler I love the idea. Is this a woodpecker? I have a hard time suspending belief if so because woodpeckers ALWAYS brace themself on the object they are pecking. (Sorry ! It's the science teacher in me! ) If it's a random bird then all is well.

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                              • baileyvidler
                                baileyvidler @chrisaakins last edited by

                                @chrisaakins It is a woodpecker. I waffled a lot between the accurate pose and the more dynamic pose, and ended up going with the dynamic pose. I'm hoping his coloration will help cue the viewer that he's a woodpecker, but I'm mostly banking on suspension of disbelief.

                                Hhh... I get stuck all the time deciding between a more reality-accurate design versus a more "stylized" design. 😕 I don't know, what do you think?

                                Bailey Vidler
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                                • carlianne
                                  carlianne @baileyvidler last edited by

                                  @baileymvidler Your line work is really beautiful! And I like that you took the concept some where fantastical. It is coming along beautifully.

                                  I was a little confused with your most recent image. Is the Fairy saying "welcome"? I was also wondering if anger makes the most sense for her reaction. I feel like she would feel angry if this happens often, but this looks more like a "WHAT IS HAPPENING" moment than a "NOT AGAIN"

                                  Did you have a reason to make her angry?

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                                  • baileyvidler
                                    baileyvidler @carlianne last edited by

                                    @carlianne Thank you!

                                    Lol, the "Welcome" is painted on a flat rock, which is falling off the porch. (Kind of like a doormat.) I suppose it kinda does look like a speech bubble. Oops! I will fix that. Thanks for pointing that out!

                                    Hm... You make a good point about the anger. If this was the first time, she would be shocked. If this were the eighth time, she'd probably be angry. So, the real question is, how much of a jerk is this woodpecker? For a one-off piece, it might be easier to go with a more shocked route.

                                    Thanks for your feedback!

                                    Bailey Vidler
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                                    • chrisaakins
                                      chrisaakins @baileyvidler last edited by

                                      @baileymvidler I am a realist so I default to "does it look believable?" I think it's just a personal preference for me. I think the picture could still work with him hanging on, weighting it down, flipping it with his weight AND banging. But you do what you think is best.

                                      Chris Akins
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