Tiger falling through the air!! (Feedback needed)

[Dima Eichhorn]

@smileyflower I think that n.1 reads best.

[alisa]

@Dima-Eichhorn That's the one I was most confident with, thanks so much for taking the time!:)

[fwolfs]

I think 3 has potential as well. The weight be at the bottom seems believable in that one too.

[alisa]

@fwolfs Thanks very much for taking the time to help me out!! Yes, in 3 it looks like the tiger is falling at quite a speed too. In the rest of them it looks like he might be in water or just tumbling on the ground even. I appreciate the feedback!

[Nyrryl Cadiz]

@smileyflower 3 looks more natural for me.

[bradyblack]

I agree, 1 or 3 has better reads to me and more interesting gesture

[alisa]

@Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks for your input on this, much appreciated!!:)

[alisa]

@bradyblack Thank you for saying so!! I appreciate your help and feedback:)

[alisa]

Thanks everyone!!

I tried to combine 1 and 3 in these further sketches. I'm personally leaning toward B as to me it looks more dimensionally consistent with the rest of my illustrations in this series, but I'm very keen to know what you think!

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Example of finished illustration:

[demotlj]

I like B although you might bring the back left leg out just a bit because it's lined up with the tiger's body and I didn't see it at first. You have a very appealing style.

[Aaron_T]

I think B looks like it has more weight but like @demotlj mentioned I think that back leg needs to be aligned a little differently to stand out. Love your style!

[alisa]

@demotlj Thank you for pointing that out, I see what you mean and wouldn't have noticed otherwise! Your compliment made me smile!

[alisa]

@Aaron_T That's a very good point, I'll be sure to make those changes in the final. Thanks so much, I'm glad!

[alisa]

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