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    Tiger falling through the air!! (Feedback needed)

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    • F
      fwolfs last edited by

      I think 3 has potential as well. The weight be at the bottom seems believable in that one too.

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      • alisa
        alisa @fwolfs last edited by

        @fwolfs Thanks very much for taking the time to help me out!! Yes, in 3 it looks like the tiger is falling at quite a speed too. In the rest of them it looks like he might be in water or just tumbling on the ground even. I appreciate the feedback!

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        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @alisa last edited by

          @smileyflower 3 looks more natural for me.

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          • bradyblack
            bradyblack last edited by

            I agree, 1 or 3 has better reads to me and more interesting gesture

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            • alisa
              alisa @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks for your input on this, much appreciated!!:)

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              • alisa
                alisa @bradyblack last edited by

                @bradyblack Thank you for saying so!! I appreciate your help and feedback:)

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                • alisa
                  alisa last edited by

                  Thanks everyone!! ❤

                  I tried to combine 1 and 3 in these further sketches. I'm personally leaning toward B as to me it looks more dimensionally consistent with the rest of my illustrations in this series, but I'm very keen to know what you think!

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                  Example of finished illustration:

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                  • demotlj
                    demotlj SVS OG last edited by

                    I like B although you might bring the back left leg out just a bit because it's lined up with the tiger's body and I didn't see it at first. You have a very appealing style.

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                    • Aaron_T
                      Aaron_T last edited by

                      I think B looks like it has more weight but like @demotlj mentioned I think that back leg needs to be aligned a little differently to stand out. Love your style!

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                      • alisa
                        alisa @demotlj last edited by

                        @demotlj Thank you for pointing that out, I see what you mean and wouldn't have noticed otherwise! Your compliment made me smile! ❤

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                        • alisa
                          alisa @Aaron_T last edited by

                          @Aaron_T That's a very good point, I'll be sure to make those changes in the final. Thanks so much, I'm glad! ❤

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