May prompt thumbnails
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So cuuuute! I do like @Chip-Valecek's suggestion about adding some props to give the bear some more character.
Another suggestion I have would be to vary or simplify your bear's shape/outline. I'm exaggerating what you have, but the shapes all seem too similar to each other. If you vary the shape, it'll make it look more organic.
Love this peaceful scene and I'm looking forward to seeing it in its final form!
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Such a lovable bear! Like the suggestion about giving him/her some props...it could add more to story as a character. Also like how the background is turning out. There seems to be a lot of white space in the lower right corner. Needs something to round out/balance the scene. Not a lot of things...floating log? Some bushes in foreground? Dragonfly?
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@Kat lovely - looking forward to seeing more of this bear!
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Thanks all! @aprilshin , I agree about the bear shape. I’ll smooth him out a bit so he’s not so predictably rounded, good suggestion.
As for all the white space, I’m thinking I might crop the piece, which would eliminate some of the white space. But I like the suggestions of adding things in the corner, too.
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@Kat OMG this is going to be so cute! I did my thumbnails last night, also. I've narrowed it down to two. I'm favoring your 3/4 Front! The composition is nice and you could do a lot with that one to produce the visual "triangle." I can't wait to see it. I have gone with an upbeat isolation too!
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@Kat You could even add some depth and put a lil frog watching the bear from afar on a lily pad somewhere around the bottom right corner. ;o)
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@kittytreets awww...how cute!
Well, I got word that I’m going back to work on Monday. Really enjoyed the time off and I was starting to feel like I was making some progress with my skills. Hard to not feel depressed now, thinking of how little time I will have again. But I’ll do the best I can. At least I’ve got a good start on this months contest.
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Did a little tweaking, adding a frog and a simple fishing pail, and cropped the image a bit. Do you have any preferences on the frog, or see anything wrong that stands out? Thank you all!
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@Kat I vote for Frog #2
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@Kat That bear looks so content. One thing that struck me as odd was how the bear is holding the fishing pole. It seems to end but I'm not sure how the pole would be lying against its belly. Super small thing, but thought I'd share it. I also prefer the frog in the second image.
I also like the shape of the tree.
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@Christijan good point about how he’s holding the pole! He needs to be grasping it more, maybe change the angle of the pole. Thanks!
After thinking about it s’more, I decided to go with a log in the corner. Adding another character would mean he wasn’t isolated anymore
Thanks all! Great feedback, I appreciate it.
