Society of Visual Storytelling

    SVSLearn Forums

    • Register
    • Login
    • Search
    • Recent
    • Tags
    • Popular
    • Users
    • Groups
    • Search

    June WIP - Clyde and Company

    Artwork
    4
    5
    230
    Loading More Posts
    • Oldest to Newest
    • Newest to Oldest
    • Most Votes
    Reply
    • Reply as topic
    Log in to reply
    This topic has been deleted. Only users with topic management privileges can see it.
    • baileyvidler
      baileyvidler last edited by

      Hello! I’m super excited about this month’s prompt. I spent a long time debating which format I wanted to do and ultimately decided on a book spread.

      Here’s my sketch/value study. Critique always welcome!

      D9CC55AD-7478-477A-861A-A5FE869AD5C8.jpeg

      Bailey Vidler
      Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

      1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 8
      • Braxton
        Braxton last edited by

        I like it! I wonder if the orange could be a touch bigger, to emphasize it's closer to the viewer?

        1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 2
        • TamaraDomuzin
          TamaraDomuzin last edited by

          Loving it so far! I do agree with @Braxton about making the orange just a bit bigger.

          www.tamaradomuzin.com
          instagram.com/tamaradomuzin

          1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
          • baileyvidler
            baileyvidler last edited by

            @Braxton @TamaraDomuzin

            Yep, I can totally see that now. Thanks for the feedback!

            Bailey Vidler
            Portfolio: baileyvidler.com

            1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
            • Neha Rawat
              Neha Rawat last edited by

              Great composition! Bongo's expressions are on point!

              https://www.nrbstudio.in/
              https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

              1 Reply Last reply Reply Quote 0
              • First post
                Last post