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    • Alvaro Morales
      Alvaro Morales last edited by

      Hi Forum Members.
      Look, this is my VERY first illustration oriented for children. It wasn´t easy to me to develop it, and hope the concept is understandable. Please, post your reviews, comments and critics because they will help to improve my style. Thanks in advance. ALVARO.GREETING MR. RABBIT.jpg

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      • Neha Rawat
        Neha Rawat last edited by

        @Alvaro-Morales Hi Alvaro. I think you have a decent understanding of perspective since your art shows depth in terms of overlapping and varying sizes and contrast.
        I agree about working on the lighting. The background looks like it's illuminated from the front but the character's shadow shows that the source of light is behind.
        As for the story, I'm reading it as the bigfoot is happy to see the bunny but is stopping it from passing through the forest? It is also unusual for the same hand and foot to be forward so maybe work on the gesture of the bigfoot as well?

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        • Alvaro Morales
          Alvaro Morales @Neha Rawat last edited by

          @Neha-Rawat Hi Naha!, Thanks a lot for the appreciation. Yes, I knew I had a lot of issues in the illustration, especially with the light source, and the gesture. I´m really new using PS for digital painting, and need to understand better many things about the use of brushes. Yeah right! It´s a sort of Bigfoot, spotting Mr. Bunny and he comes to say HI!. Yeap, It looks weird talking about the gesture, and should redefine it better.. Thanks again! Best!. AE

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