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    My first fully digital drawing. C&C welcome

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    • Yulia Tsinko
      Yulia Tsinko last edited by Yulia Tsinko

      My first ever project started and completed in photoshop. It's a t-shirt design for my husband, as he loves tinkering with bikes and his email avatar is a smiley robot face. I wanted to keep it really simple, as I tend to lean too much towards realism and get lost in details. Any comments on the line work? Should I've kept them more uniform?

      EgorT_V1.jpg

      https://www.instagram.com/dreamsplats/

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Yulia Tsinko last edited by

        @Yulia-Tsinko cute! My one advice is to maybe draw the bike in profile so that it would be easier to identify as a bike but that's just based on my taste. The image is definitely working as is. Great work!

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • deborah Haagenson
          deborah Haagenson last edited by

          Very nice. I like the line work. He reminds a little of Mr. Zip Code from the 1960s 😊!!

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          • Yulia Tsinko
            Yulia Tsinko @deborah Haagenson last edited by

            @deborah-Haagenson said in My first fully digital drawing. C&C welcome:

            Mr. Zip Code

            I had to google him, but yes, I can definitely see the resemblance=)

            https://www.instagram.com/dreamsplats/

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            • Yulia Tsinko
              Yulia Tsinko @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @Nyrryl-Cadiz

              Thanks! I did a few thumbnails with different bike angles, but I liked the simplicity of this one. In hind sight, I probably should have done a 3/4 view.

              https://www.instagram.com/dreamsplats/

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              • JudeKillory
                JudeKillory last edited by

                Very nice, so clean. Lee White has a shading class that if you decide to put tone and value on future work would be very helpful. He actually shades and highlights a robot in it.

                https://www.instagram.com/jude_killory/

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                • Neha Rawat
                  Neha Rawat last edited by

                  This is so cute! I think simple is good for a tshirt design.
                  I'd just try and shorten the horizontal bar where the 2 handlebars join. Right now the vertical part of the handles are almost coinciding with the robot's body.

                  https://www.nrbstudio.in/
                  https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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