Dancing Ink Fairy - help me with comic story :-)
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Hi , here is my idea. I know its not quite readable but I got a bit stuck and don't know how to solve it.
The idea is that the ink bottle fell and a guy runs out of the room to bring something to clean it (not clear, don't know how to solve it).
The ink turns into ink fairy and starts to dance to the music in the room (need to clarify where the music comes from).
Guy comes back and manages to take a photo (not clear how to connect this guy with the guy from 1st frame).
I am curious of your ideas, thanks!
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Maybe incorporate him returning with some janitor supplies in his hands so the viewer knows what his task is. Maybe in the end he cleans it up and the ink fairy is gone. Just some suggestions.
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@kimmypie @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thank you so much for comments!
Here is a redo
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@aska and later it gets shared as a tiktok viodeo
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@Molambo
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@aska This is a much clearer concept. I think you have a great start.
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@kimmypie thank you!
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I feel like I could have done it better but don't know how...
