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    • David starfas
      David starfas last edited by

      I wanted to do a 3 color lithography-like piece. Bummed about the black and white requirement. So, I did both. Would love your feedback.Ink fairy SVS.jpg

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        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @David starfas last edited by

        @David-starfas ooh! spooky!... my one suggestion is add more action to the character's poses. currently, they look stiff.

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        • David starfas
          David starfas last edited by

          Thanks I have been looking at the gesture of the fairies arms and thinking I should re work them to make them look better. Give them a bend to look like she is actually supporting the weight of the ink jar. Maybe this slight change will make her look a little less static.

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