Ladybug, Frog, House and DUCK! Designs
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@Gary-Wilkinson I am thinking the bugs with longer legs will suit your 8 year old reader better so 4, 8, 9, 10. Other than that I like 1 and 7. But out of the 4 older ones I like 8, 10.
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5! So good! I'm designing a ladybug right now too, gonna be hard to not think of these beauties
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@Gary-Wilkinson I think it comes down between 8 and 9 for me.
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@Gary-Wilkinson - these are such gorgeous little ladybugs and all so different. Well done creating so many alternatives. My personal favourite was number 2 just from the fact it’s adorable but I did totally appreciate the good point @Heather-Boyd made that older kids may prefer an older looking bug. I liked bug 9 of the older looking ones from the point of view of her silhouette. Sorry if that’s unhelpful as we seem to all like different ones, I think that must be because they’re all awesome
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Cool designs @Gary-Wilkinson, I like 9 for the age market you described.
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They are so adorable! I love 2 most, because of its round shape, and personality reflected through this design, it also looks a bit unusual. It also fits well with your other works, since it is HUGGABLE!
3 and 4 look a bit like snails, since it has large body vs. small shell. Maybe it is just because you havent put color in there. As a person who loves organic shapes, 8, 9, 10 are cute but not for me. They should be appealing to many others people still. Nice job
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I really like 4 or 5 for that description. 1, 2 and 3 seem to young to me, and 9 and 10 too old. 8 is fun, but a bit too human to clearly be a ladybug in my eyes. I feel expressive poses with 6 and 7 could get challenging.
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I like 8 and 9. I think 8 is very cute but the glasses on 9 automatically make her look smart. Glasses are a good way to automatically convey smart in a simple image. Maybe combine the two?
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@Gary-Wilkinson #9 all day
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I agree with the others, 4 suits the description. I fell in love with 5 and 7 tho
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Love all your designs Gary! May favorites are 4 and 7
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My favorite is 7, but if you need it to look more human I also like 8. All of them are very cute!
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@Gary-Wilkinson Hi I like 7 and 10. They are so expressive!
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@Gary-Wilkinson wow they are all impressive! But I really like 4 and 9 the best! Good work!
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7 strikes me s the best design but I saw someone mention that it would be challenging for poses. You could convey a lot of "gesture" in the face though. I think it’s still a viable option. 4 or 8 would be good alternatives if you want to work with poses more but 8 should have more human like eyes to feel more relatable I think.
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@Gary-Wilkinson Wow these are all so cute, and such nice designs! My personal favorite is 7 but it looks too young for your target audience. 9 and 10 are better for an 8 year old target audience! 4 is also great but I think it's still a bit young, maybe more appropriate for a 6 year old.
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@Gary Wilkinson For what it's worth my 8 year old likes 2, 6, and 7 (personally I really like 2). I love your profile image by the way.
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I really like the face of 7! It's a cute face, but it still has an older feeling rather than the other ones before it. I think with how my brain sees this, the bodies between 8 and 10 have an older feeling because the body is taller and longer, which makes them relatable characters to an older kid. When I draw, I usually make younger characters have a cutesy, squished, smaller body. Sometimes when I draw, I also squish an old person to make them appear cuter. Haha. And when I draw older kids, I do the opposite. I think for this age group, I like 10's stance and body! She has more action to her. What if you combined the face of 7 and the body of 10? I think that would make her seem like an older kid, but still cute and innocent. I also love 10's coat with buttons or patches on it! And the scarf! It makes her feel like she's a main character
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Sorry for writing a novel on your post, lol... I also would just like to add, I work in researching trends in toys, activities, games, etc. and one thing I have seen over and over again is that kids at this age group like feeling older than they really are. So a character like 10 is muah perfecto
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Thank you for everyone's suggestions and comments, they will really help push the concept towards a final stage. I really appreciate you all taking the time to lend your knowledge and would love to reply to every comment individually, but I got a lot more replies than expected
As it stands 9, 4 and 7 have had some great responses, so I will try to focus on those and see what can be improved to get it down to a final choice. The character designs were also posted on facebook and got over 400 replies for which a majority went for 7, however as some of you mentioned it could suffer due to restrictions in it's poses (i'm sure I can use it as a side/background character in a future project though...)
One thing that will be a big factor in the ladybug's design is the shape of her friend the frog, as both are of equal standing in the story and have similar qualities, but I still want to make them work together, yet stand out on their own design. I've played around with about 10 designs, but it's felt more of a struggle than the ladybugs. Personally I like G if it were to go with 9 or H if it were to go with 4.
