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    Christmas Speedpaint Series - Critiques Welcomed

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    • Michael Angelo Go
      Michael Angelo Go last edited by Michael Angelo Go

      Hello @Nyrryl-Cadiz I remember your feedback on my first piece and did some adjustments, but necessarily chose the pose you recommended. I realized that after taking a second look at her, I realized that having her leg out and torso bent did not make her look attractive, so I fixed her to look more stable and symmetrical.

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      Do you think this approach also works, or I should go all-in with the pose you proposed? She got a little stiff looking.

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        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Michael Angelo Go last edited by

        @Michael-Angelo-Go it could but perhaps consider relaxing her shoulders and only showing 1 foot.

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