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    • Chris Philpot
      Chris Philpot last edited by Chris Philpot

      I'm probably oversharing but it's keeping me moving forward. These may not qualify as neutral poses. Maybe I'll make him more resigned and less gestural in the second one.MoreYetis_ChrisPhilpot.jpg

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      • JoshuaDages
        JoshuaDages @Chris Philpot last edited by

        @Chris-Philpot I love these poses! I'm struggling too with neutral poses because I want to show the yeti's character!

        I wonder if your yeti could be holding the creature (left image) while sitting down, so you can integrate the "sitting" criterium of the contest? The right-side image could also be him "walking" haha. Just a thought. Really good job so far!

        Joshua Dages
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        • Chris Philpot
          Chris Philpot @JoshuaDages last edited by

          @JoshuaDages That's a good idea. I might do that. Thanks so much!

          https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
          http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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          • Kim Hunter
            Kim Hunter last edited by

            Ditto on the neutral pose dilemma. With only 5 poses, I want to get as much into them as possible. Wonder if we could get an official opinion on this?

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            • DaveLeekArt
              DaveLeekArt last edited by

              I read this as this yeti stumbled across a little cute fur ball of sorts that he decided to bring home and then it/they wreaked havoc on him for a while before calming down and they then become friends. Am I close? Are you going to included the little critter(s) in the finished submission as well? Could be a cool add-on character if you’ve got time for the extra work.

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              • Cayleen
                Cayleen @Chris Philpot last edited by

                @Chris-Philpot Ohh, I love the baby yetis!!! I read these as babies from the first go, but, if you go with the first sketches where the dad yeti has horns, I'd give the babies little horn nubs to match him a bit better and not just be fuzz balls. Also, maybe rounding the dad's body a bit and shortening his legs to match their roundyness too?

                Cayleen Blackmore

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                • Chris Philpot
                  Chris Philpot @Cayleen last edited by

                  @Cayleen Excellent. Yeah, just fluff won't be enough to tie them together as the same species. Will look at the horns again or some other anatomical cue. Thanks!

                  https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                  http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                  • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                    Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Chris Philpot last edited by

                    @Chris-Philpot these are not character designs but rather spot illustrations which is not a bad thing. This may get disqualified in the contest but they’re great illustrations and perfect additions to a portfolio. If this is what you really want, I say go for it. What matters is that you’re doing what makes you happy. Also, yeti dad looks adorable and the babies are a riot. I love them.

                    Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                    Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                    YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                    • Chris Philpot
                      Chris Philpot @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Thanks! I think you're right about the character design vs. spots. I do enjoy the contests but I try to keep in mind that portfolio pieces and finding my own voice are the ultimate goals. The competition element is fun but not an end unto itself. That said, I have a strong people-pleasing streak and hate breaking rules. I'll probably split the difference and see what comes of that. Thanks again!

                      https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                      http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                      • Chris Philpot
                        Chris Philpot @DaveLeekArt last edited by

                        @DaveLeekArt I'll include the little fuzzballs with some story elements to make them more obviously infant yetis. Thanks!

                        https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                        http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                        • Chris Philpot
                          Chris Philpot @Kim Hunter last edited by

                          @Kim-Hunter Thanks!

                          https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                          http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Chris Philpot last edited by

                            @Chris-Philpot i agree. When I join contests, I always try to tailor my entry to what I want and what my portfolio needs. Just like what Will always says. Follow your gut with this piece. Make it yours.

                            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
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                            • Naters.Art
                              Naters.Art last edited by

                              love the render!

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                              • Chris Philpot
                                Chris Philpot @Naters.Art last edited by

                                @Naters-Calderone Thanks!

                                https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                                http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                                • Chris Philpot
                                  Chris Philpot last edited by Chris Philpot

                                  Here's how these yetis are looking. Gonna sleep on it and make a last round of edits tomorrow with fresh eyes hopefully. Thanks again for all the replies!

                                  Yeti_ChrisPhilpot_2.jpg

                                  https://www.instagram.com/chrisphilpotpicturebooks/
                                  http://www.chrisphilpot.com

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                                  • Cayleen
                                    Cayleen @Chris Philpot last edited by

                                    @Chris-Philpot Yes! These are awesome!

                                    Cayleen Blackmore

                                    cayleencreates.com
                                    https://www.instagram.com/cayleencreates/

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