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    Illustrations for Agency Catalog - Critiques Welcomed

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    • Neha Rawat
      Neha Rawat last edited by

      @Nyrryl-Cadiz Such a tricky perspective and you've nailed it! Such lovely magical vibes! ✨

      If I may be nit picky, the center building is quite a warm purple and almost competing with the red sleigh/santa. Maybe adjust that a tad and see if makes a difference?

      https://www.nrbstudio.in/
      https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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      • Nyrryl  Cadiz
        Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @braden H last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

        @Braden-Hallett @Neha-Rawat Thank you!

        @Neha-Rawat i see what you mean. I've already moved on to the medusa piece but if I still have time left, I'll get back to it. What about you? Have you already sent in your pieces for the catalog?

        Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
        Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
        YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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        • Neha Rawat
          Neha Rawat @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

          @Nyrryl-Cadiz Yeah. Fortunately I managed to salvage some time between 2 projects so I submitted 2 pieces earlier this month.

          https://www.nrbstudio.in/
          https://www.instagram.com/nrbstudio.in

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          • Nyrryl  Cadiz
            Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by

            One day left, still a long way to go.

            medusa 7 rgb small.jpg

            Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
            Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
            YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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            • Kim Rosenlof
              Kim Rosenlof @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

              @Nyrryl-Cadiz I love the perspective and the animals are so cute! It makes me want to know what is going on in the story!

              Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/kiminyrose/

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              • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Kim Rosenlof last edited by

                @Kim-Rosenlof thank you!

                Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                  update on Medusa piece. it's due tonight. i'm so stressed. 😬 😬 😬

                  medusa 10 rgb small.jpg

                  Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                  Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                  YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                  • rubeda
                    rubeda @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz don't be stressed it's looking really great! can I suggest something to you? You have a rim light on medusa and the statue on the foreground but not on the hero (what;s his name? trying to remember clash of the titans!) also maybe you could darken the statue in the foreground and then maybe lightening up the building in the background or maybe adding some smoke effects creating some depth and atmosphere.. just a thought other than that it looks GREAT!

                    Alex
                    IG: https://www.instagram.com/rubeda/
                    email: rafael.ubeda@gmail.com
                    website:https://rafaelalexubeda.myportfolio.com/

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                    • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                      Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @rubeda last edited by

                      @rubeda thanks! I’m submitting my pieces in a few minutes though. I really have no time left. Maybe I can revisit it in the future.

                      Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                      Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                      YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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                      • rubeda
                        rubeda @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                        @Nyrryl-Cadiz no worries! you will be fine! they look great!

                        Alex
                        IG: https://www.instagram.com/rubeda/
                        email: rafael.ubeda@gmail.com
                        website:https://rafaelalexubeda.myportfolio.com/

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                        • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                          Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG last edited by Nyrryl Cadiz

                          hi everyone! So I was going to submit this piece as seen below but @rubeda made a great point about adding smoke effects so I decided to add a last minute mist and I really like the new look. This is it for the medusa piece. I'm tired and really stressed but so relieved it's over. thanks for all the help everyone!

                          medusa 11 rgb small.jpg

                          medusa 13 rgb small.jpg

                          Portfolio: nyrrylcadiz.com
                          Instagram: https://www.instagram.com/nyrryl_cadiz/
                          YouTube: https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCbJCF1Im8ZO7hpGWTKOJMuA

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