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    Willow Wicked critiques please!

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    • Asyas_illos
      Asyas_illos last edited by

      So I just finished this book cover for myself and I’m wondering if anybody has any last thoughts or suggestions that I can frown upon. Just kidding I enjoy all feedback! 91657BA8-5C0E-4AFC-BBC6-F043FB1A469C.jpeg

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      • miranda-hoover
        miranda-hoover @Asyas_illos last edited by

        @powsupermum Very cute witch!

        My main comment would be that her wand and socks blend in a bit and can get lost, especially when viewed from a distance. Maybe try lightening those colors or adding highlights?

        I really like how you have her framed by the moon. Very cute!

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          doro_thea last edited by

          hi, I like your approach over all, the only thing that I would say is that it feels very black to me. did you try another shade for the dark parts? maybe more blue tinted or purple tinted dark? And I agree on the wand blending in with the dress too much... Other than that: super cute. I also like the moon farming the witch very much.

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          • Asyas_illos
            Asyas_illos @miranda-hoover last edited by

            @miranda-hoover Thank you I guess I was working to close and forgot to zoom out a little to notice that, but I will definitely make some adjustments! Thank you for pointing that out!

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            • Asyas_illos
              Asyas_illos @doro_thea last edited by

              @doro_thea thank you very much! I did want a very dark look and I think for the sky it actually is a little in the purple scale but I’ll see if I can go in adjust the saturation a little bit I’m still getting used to working digitally!😁

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              • Asyas_illos
                Asyas_illos last edited by Asyas_illos

                @doro_thea @miranda-hoover I made some adjustments does this read a little better?
                I lightened up the socks and wand and played with the fog colors a bit to tone down the black.ACDD13A3-5308-4556-8DA5-95A6FF96514D.jpeg

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                • Nyrryl  Cadiz
                  Nyrryl Cadiz SVS OG @Asyas_illos last edited by

                  @powsupermum hi! I think it’s good to go. Great work.

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                    Asyas_illos @Nyrryl Cadiz last edited by

                    @Nyrryl-Cadiz thanks!

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                      doro_thea @Asyas_illos last edited by

                      @powsupermum I think this helps a lot, that it is not as black anymore. It is still very dark, so nothing you intended was lost. really nice work!

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